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Aenimal Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-18
Posts 7350the ass-end of space 
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a subtle shift wavers the illusion collapsing ribcages in the harrowed gravity of apprehension over emotion i've seen the beacons burn awed that anything as bright or beautiful should ever fail but then, we did didn't we. |
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MGROVES
since 2004-02-01
Posts 3802california |
simply exquisit. thanks |
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Martie
Moderator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Raph You are amazing in the way you bite down on a poem....and to read it hurts, yet...... |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
Aenimal -- OMG, an ocean of emotion expressed in this -- sad and eloquent at the same time.  .......jo |
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muted
since 2004-01-15
Posts 2949Elapsing, Eclipsing, Evolving |
sometimes things just burn too hot and get consumed much faster...then, only left with memories...your 'flicker's enjoyed this |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
Oh Raph, god this packs a punch Bello. So achingly beautiful. Unbelievable. it's a keeper. Mxx The clouds never expect it when it rains, but the sea, changes colour, but the sea, does not change. |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
dang |
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Kaoru
since 2003-06-07
Posts 3892where the wild flowers grow |
Oh, Raph... I'm shedding tears.  |
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Goldenrose Member Elite
since 2003-05-30
Posts 3665 |
This was quite brilliant Raph... ''Death where is thy sting? Love where is thy glory?'' William Shakespeare. |
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Juju Member Elite
since 2003-12-29
Posts 3429In your dreams |
I liked the poem(: |
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rosepetals25
since 2000-05-31
Posts 3076PA |
Very nicely done  I like!Tara |
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Aenimal Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-18
Posts 7350the ass-end of space |
thanks everybody Are we etched in stone or scratched in the sand waiting for the waves to come and reclaim the land? ~ The Stone Roses |
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gemjop Member Elite
since 2002-11-18
Posts 2587Pencilveinia, USA |
the scenery, you make me want to cry and die all at once. |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
My goodness Raph! Wow. hugs, Chris Life itself is the most wonderful fairy tale. |
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Susan Caldwell Member Rara Avis
since 2002-12-27
Posts 8348Florida |
"awed that anything as bright or beautiful should ever fail" It is amazing...and sometimes so disappointing..and other times such a relief...  When you going to put a picture back up??  "cast me gently into the morning, for the night has been unkind" |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
yup, it is a powerful punch you've sent across the airwaves....I'm so sorry for both of you. Hugs |
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Aenimal Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-18
Posts 7350the ass-end of space |
Thanks for the kind replies everyone Susan, when? When I find one that doesn't make me or other people dry heave. |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
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Tequilia_Sunrise Senior Member
since 2003-02-19
Posts 612Lochalsh, Ontario, Canada |
Beautifull |
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inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio |
youre just groovy, you know that? |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
a well written flickering release of pain |
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Susan Member Ascendant
since 2004-03-27
Posts 5104walking the surreal |
This was indeed exquisitely written. SusanThe whole of the Universe resides within each individual heart. |
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steavenr Member Elite
since 2003-11-17
Posts 4058 |
"the harrowed gravity of apprehension" ...such a well turned phrase...great write...excellent flow |
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Aenimal Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-18
Posts 7350the ass-end of space |
Thank you kindly everyone |
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