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Look deep
into my eyes
where my
soul lies

Go deep
into my body
feel my souls cries

When your
about to part
and go in again
Stop
to touch my heart

Release
the pain within

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oh
how beautiful
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2 posted 05-28-2004 12:49 PM       View Profile for MGROVES   Email MGROVES   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for MGROVES

thankyou dixie

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3 posted 05-28-2004 02:20 PM       View Profile for Aimster   Email Aimster   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Aimster

excellent use of rhyme...
great job!
take care,
amy

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4 posted 05-28-2004 02:41 PM       View Profile for Susan   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Susan

Ah yes, please . . . I can feel this one.

Susan

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Lovely...James
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I like this alot.. I can definately relate to your words.

Tara
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THANKYOU ALL

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beautifully expressed ... yes all we need is the touch of understanding

Hope
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oh hope you got it exactly how it was written. just once i wish another could see and feel that as you. GOD BLESS YOU

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Though each of us feels our own pain and express it differently, you touched on the commality of it.  Good job!  
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thankyou very much  

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really good. i wish someone could do that for me.

lost and afraid i am calling out to you light angel.

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Soft and melancholy...
This is beautiful.

Always, Alyssa

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good job
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wonderful.  definitely touching.
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