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LeeJ
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0 posted 2004-05-27 08:07 AM


My heart sashays in the waves of your true north
At last, at last, sweet spreading roses nestle in my breast
Your unique aroma touches my mind in morning’s life
Atoms fainting, teasing calling to my mind

I have come far in your embrace, most fervent power
And will grow like the roots of forsythia towards you
Like the hours by your side chase each other…chasing me
Multiplying into a sensual melody

Seducing my eternal soul, brushing lips of silent words
Fate winks at each kiss of our story shines bright
Like a sailing breeze in twilight
We soften with moon glows subconscious level

I am loved by your flaming consistency, stretching, bursting
Swelling in a world of pearl like a satisfied companion
Brightened by love’s blazon circle of promise, in your spell
Weak, uncontrollable, aggressive surge of your face, as though my own

Lost within your conversational eyes and desired impact of such
Like a starlit night fall into sleepy wonders of symbolism
Undisclosed waves unfolding as you stare back, meditating
Saying “notice me always”, to that expression I am loyal

Did you know, I feel, your secrets, surreal phantoms of thoughts
Like midsummer touches skin with the intensity of humid friendship
Laden hands upon blossoms of fruit, adorned…impossible, yet
Within my arms, smothered with delicate glow of new memories

Tranquil and peaceful intimacy matures great wisdom
Can you see the painting yet to be placed so tenderly on canvas?
We stand before mountains which lean in our favor
Beautiful confessing colors, like grand mystic dreams

I know your silent voice speaks to me in summer air
Like sweet music gathering heaven’s harps, we are children of nature
Classical breaths from the voice of violins
Is this eternal love, of love of which angles sigh

And God speaks….I want for you to be…
Be of all nature, as sunrise twinkles in your eyes
There bequeathed are my words….I am yours
As we together listen to the world, across a sapphire sky


© Copyright 2004 Lee J. - All Rights Reserved
Susan Caldwell
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1 posted 2004-05-27 10:43 AM


"My heart sashays in the waves of your true north"


I really like that opening line.

"cast me gently into the morning, for the night has been unkind"
~Sarah McLachlan~

JL
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2 posted 2004-05-27 01:05 PM


A lover’s love song straight from the heart of a poet.  Enticing read Lee J.
Beautifully expressed.

JL

She said: ”You look cute in the dark.”


rosepetals25
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3 posted 2004-05-27 01:10 PM


Goodness.. there are so many wonderful lines in there I wouldn't know where to start. Wonderful write, I enjoyed

Tara

iliana
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4 posted 2004-05-29 03:08 AM


Yes, brain candy, indeed!   ...jo
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5 posted 2004-05-29 03:13 AM


enjoyed this as i do all of yours


passing shadows
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6 posted 2004-05-29 03:20 AM


you are heart candy
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