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Your still here.....even if your gone...

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misao
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0 posted 05-26-2004 10:12 PM       View Profile for misao   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for misao


I can feel his pain, happiness, his sorrow
to me this love is so dear
just to see him hurt like this brings every bitter tear.
The blood on my hand from his wound so deep
the scar on his heart will not heal
the feeling of love stays within him
till the very day we fall asleep
I think of you.....all the time
from now untill the end
but the pain I feel inside my heart
will not and could never mend.
I see you right near me....your name I tryed to call
your here by my side
you seem so close but oh so far
then you vanished....you were never here at all.
He came to me in my sleep
my tears I tryed to hide
he told me, "I need you"
I awoke to find him....
by my side..........


"Once the red string of fate has been broken it cant be connected again."

Priestess Kikyo----Hit anime "Inuyasha"

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JamesMichael
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1 posted 05-27-2004 12:25 AM       View Profile for JamesMichael   Email JamesMichael   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for JamesMichael

Nice...James
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2 posted 05-27-2004 12:29 AM       View Profile for *Belabebeautiful*   Email *Belabebeautiful*   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for *Belabebeautiful*

I really enjoyed this, very touching, a slight bit confusing at the end but I got the impression that it was suppose to be. I can relate in part to this piece so it struck a personall chord in me as well, nicely done.
~Live and Laugh~

The memories are worth the pain when the happiness is outweighs the sorrow
~Bella~

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3 posted 05-27-2004 01:13 AM       View Profile for Kaoru   Email Kaoru   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Kaoru

Emotional and touching.

Thank you for sharing it.
passing shadows
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4 posted 05-27-2004 03:36 AM       View Profile for passing shadows   Email passing shadows   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for passing shadows

yes...very touching indeed
vlraynes
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Somewhere... out there...


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Hi, Misao...

You already know my thoughts on this one...
but?... I'll tell you again... smile

You used your words to reach in and tug on
my heart... a very emotional and touching
write... and I truly 'felt' it...

Nicely done...

"When the power of love overcomes the love
of power the world will know peace."
--Jimi Hendrix

Juju
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6 posted 05-29-2004 12:20 PM       View Profile for Juju   Email Juju   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Juju's Home Page   View IP for Juju

Yeah to inunasha(Can't spell)
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7 posted 05-29-2004 02:10 PM       View Profile for Skyfire   Email Skyfire   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Skyfire

I just love this one
Margherita
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8 posted 05-29-2004 04:55 PM       View Profile for Margherita   Email Margherita   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Margherita

A longing answered.
Very touching.
Love, Margherita
iliana
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9 posted 05-29-2004 05:14 PM       View Profile for iliana   Email iliana   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for iliana

I think I read this differently than most of the comments to it I read.  I read it like there was someone you loved out of the picture you were still wanting and that wanting hurt the one you were with but loved you all the same -- it made sense to me that way -- good write -- the feelings are felt.  
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10 posted 12-01-2005 11:07 PM       View Profile for Mysteria   Email Mysteria   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Mysteria

Ah heck and and I read this like it was a beloved pet - go figure.  That is the beauty of poetry - its up to the reader to take from it what they will.  Very nicely done.
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11 posted 10-29-2007 02:21 PM       View Profile for Artic Wind   Email Artic Wind   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Artic Wind

love this one

ARCTIC WIND
 
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