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0 posted 2004-05-26 05:12 PM



Welcome


Sometimes there are no words
to explain what a heart feels or
what a mind hears when it's alone

Sometimes you dont want talk
to the people that smile and reassure
promising they know the emotions that
overwhelm your brittle thoughts

Sometimes you want the darkness
and you welcome it into your thoughts
hoping it can blanket all the pain

Sometimes you want the nothingness
to save you from the current of tears
that carry you to places that one day you
might not be able to find your way back from

[This message has been edited by rosepetals25 (05-26-2004 06:39 PM).]

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1 posted 2004-05-26 07:09 PM


rosepetals25
Good thoughts, good write, good read.

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2 posted 2004-05-27 12:35 PM


Nice writing...James
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3 posted 2004-05-27 03:47 AM


awesome!
rosepetals25
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4 posted 2004-05-27 05:51 AM


Thank you all for stopping in

It's been awhile since I've written anything... but apparently my muse decided to stop in for a visit

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5 posted 2004-05-27 06:09 PM


Tara~
It is SO good to see you~

This one is deeply layered with some awesomely dark thoughts~

Welcome home ... *hug* that muse for me~
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost,
the spirit rejoices over what it has left.
- Sufi epigram <))><

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6 posted 2004-05-27 06:43 PM


This is excellent Tara...
and it is SO good to have you back!
Hugs~

~Somewhere in my heart I'm always
Dancing with you in the summer rain~

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7 posted 2004-05-27 07:30 PM


You guys are beyond sweet.  I've been gone for ...sheesh.. for the most part a year at least? And here you are with open arms. Hugs to all of you


Tara

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8 posted 2004-05-28 11:36 AM


Tara,

sad but powerful piece..i've known
this feeling before. **sighs**
take care hon,
Amy

"When life gives you sorrow, may you experience the spirit of laughter"

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9 posted 2004-05-28 07:21 PM


Sometimes there are no words
to explain what a heart feels or
what a mind hears when it's alone
================================

which is exactly why my muse so rarely speaks to me anymore....

yes.... I know....

welcome back Tara...nice to see you posting again.

MGROVES
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10 posted 2004-05-28 11:35 PM


oh yes, i can feel this, this is awsome


rosepetals25
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11 posted 2004-05-29 11:58 AM


Thank you Aimster, Janet, and MGROVES for stopping in

Muses are so fickle aren't they Janet? Hopefully mine will hang out for at least a little while!

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