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Aimster
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0 posted 2004-05-26 01:32 PM


There was a time when innocence was all around me
A time when I had not a care on my mind
Now I see though the anger and confusion that surrounds me
I was young before, and obviously completely blind

Tomorrow is our future, we all know it is true
So therefore, we must preserve today
Do not waste time on foolish tears
It only allows the confusion and pain to stay

My life brought to me a wake up call
I feel the tides of the ocean sweep over me
Thinking of the children I've never had
From this hurt, I long for them to be free

There was a time when I was clouded by my own innocence
Now my eyes burn with electricity
I strive for the very best I can be
Never will I settle for mediocracy

To put one foot in front of the other
While enduring a lifetime of pain
It's something yes to be proud of
It shows how a flower can bloom in the sweet gentle rain


"When life gives you sorrow, may you experience the spirit of laughter"

© Copyright 2004 Amy Kennedy - All Rights Reserved
Susan
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walking the surreal
1 posted 2004-05-26 02:40 PM


Very touching.

Smiles -- Susan

The whole of the Universe resides within each individual heart.

GlisteningRain
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The clouds
2 posted 2004-05-26 02:43 PM


^_^ soft sweet rain
rosepetals25
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3 posted 2004-05-26 02:56 PM



Long time no see huh?

Inspirational is what comes to mind I really liked it.

Tara

ParisGrl
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4 posted 2004-05-26 05:39 PM


Amy,

I know how you feel.  Great Write.

~Laura~

Saunni
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5 posted 2004-05-26 11:25 PM


This is very touching and I understood it so well. Great write here!

Sauni:)The Only Time I See The Sun Is When I'm Within That Vanilla Breeze.The Only Time I'm One With The Sun Is When He Shelters Me From The Rain.

passing shadows
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6 posted 2004-05-27 03:27 AM


it sounds like you already have it figured out
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