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Edder
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0 posted 05-25-2004 01:38 PM       View Profile for Edder   Email Edder   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for Edder


I've no desire
to dredge memories
long since settled
or stir clouds
of "what once was"

   yet

were my lips
to betray me
and slip your name
from the depths
of a reckless dream
I've nothing to fear
only the walls would hear

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ThisDiamond
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1 posted 05-25-2004 01:48 PM       View Profile for ThisDiamond   Email ThisDiamond   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit ThisDiamond's Home Page   View IP for ThisDiamond

Much said within this well written verse.
Smiles,
TD
Susan Caldwell
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2 posted 05-25-2004 01:56 PM       View Profile for Susan Caldwell   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Susan Caldwell

yes...but I would know...

oh wait...this is about me right?

you already know I love this...and I love how you are writing these days...yummy!

"cast me gently into the morning, for the night has been unkind"
~Sarah McLachlan~

Earth Angel
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Realms of Light


3 posted 05-25-2004 02:26 PM       View Profile for Earth Angel   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Earth Angel's Home Page   View IP for Earth Angel

I hear ya!
Intriguing write!


EA
Marsha
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4 posted 05-25-2004 02:50 PM       View Profile for Marsha   Email Marsha   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Marsha's Home Page   View IP for Marsha

Ed darling poet man this is simply scrumptious, the Oh tapped within these lines is outstandingly expressed. I swear I can hear the ache within the unspoken sigh. As for the feelings that this conjures up in my soul it is awesome. YOU are an amazing writer and this is an exquisite example of your artistry. I love the phraseology in this, it is absolutely perfect

Love and warm stuff
as always
Mushy





Tomorrow is another day I don't know what it holds
but I can face the future with courage brave and bold

Footprints In My Heart
Kethry
passing shadows
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displaced


5 posted 05-26-2004 03:28 AM       View Profile for passing shadows   Email passing shadows   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for passing shadows

*sigh*
GlisteningRain
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The clouds


6 posted 05-26-2004 04:03 AM       View Profile for GlisteningRain   Email GlisteningRain   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for GlisteningRain

Like...me.
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on the threshold of a dream


7 posted 05-26-2004 04:02 PM       View Profile for suthern   Email suthern   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for suthern

Excellent write, my friend... Sometimes we just can't help those strolls down memory lane... even when each step pierces us with pain. Friends might say "don't go there"... but walls won't tattle. *S*
rosepetals25
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8 posted 05-26-2004 04:06 PM       View Profile for rosepetals25   Email rosepetals25   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for rosepetals25


I really liked and enjoyed this

Tara
Snow
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desert flower looking for rain


9 posted 05-26-2004 04:08 PM       View Profile for Snow   Email Snow   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Snow's Home Page   View IP for Snow

well you know i love it... *smiles*
this is.. for lack of .. well i was going to say .. "better words" but you know what.. there is no other better word... this is
yummy in all the right ways!!!
:-)
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Elapsing, Eclipsing, Evolving


10 posted 05-28-2004 03:55 AM       View Profile for muted   Email muted   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for muted

well, now that i breathe easier about this...
you know it is so damned good, the emotion pierced to the bone my friend.

I just love readin' your stuff
iliana
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11 posted 05-29-2004 02:03 AM       View Profile for iliana   Email iliana   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for iliana

"I've no desire
to dredge memories
long since settled
or stir clouds
of "what once was"

   yet

were my lips
to betray me
and slip your name
from the depths
of a reckless dream
I've nothing to fear
only the walls would hear"

Loved this!  The other night my husband said some words slipped from my lips....he said I was mumbling something and he asked if I was okay.  I responded (still asleep I guess because I have no memory of this), "Yeah, I'm just trying to get the weeds out of my computer."  Weird....our subconscious.   ...jo

BluesSerenade
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By the Seaside


12 posted 05-29-2004 11:26 PM       View Profile for BluesSerenade   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for BluesSerenade

Dreams, like a good storm, aren't so frightening
as much as they are something to contend with.

As always, I enjoy reading your way with words,   Edder~

Ratleader
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Visiting Earth on a Guest Pass


13 posted 06-01-2004 10:58 PM       View Profile for Ratleader   Email Ratleader   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Ratleader's Home Page   View IP for Ratleader

It's often said insincerely around here, but when I say it, it's for real...I do wish I had written this.

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Kristabell
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14 posted 06-01-2004 11:44 PM       View Profile for Kristabell   Email Kristabell   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Kristabell

So sad, yet so understandable.
Tequilia_Sunrise
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15 posted 07-08-2004 01:22 AM       View Profile for Tequilia_Sunrise   Email Tequilia_Sunrise   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Tequilia_Sunrise

this happens to often.......  very good write
Artic Wind
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Realm of Supernatural


16 posted 11-11-2007 01:03 PM       View Profile for Artic Wind   Email Artic Wind   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Artic Wind

enjoyed

ARCTIC WIND
 
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