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JamesMichael
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0 posted 2004-05-25 01:24 AM


Waiting Sweetly For Her

I noticed a gray haired woman today.
She was standing overlooking a
small graveyard on Kam highway.
She was holding a large bundle of flowers
possibly slated for her loved ones grave.
No one knows all the thoughts
going through places in her heart.
Perhaps she believes in life after death.
No one knows for sure except her.
Perhaps she believes in a place
where her Heavenly Father and her
loved ones wait sweetly for her.

JamesLee
May24
2004

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TerryW
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1 posted 2004-05-25 01:33 AM


I love this!!!!  So touching and heartfelt!  Thank you for making my night!  

~you reached inside, you touched my heart,
and I am all the better for it~
Terry A. Woodson, Jr.

Marge Tindal
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2 posted 2004-05-25 02:45 AM


JamesMichael~
This touches so sweetly~
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost,
the spirit rejoices over what it has left.
- Sufi epigram <))><

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3 posted 2004-05-25 02:49 AM


I'm amazed at you
JamesMichael
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4 posted 2004-05-26 12:09 PM


Thank you Terry, Marge and passing shadows for tshe lovely responses...James
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5 posted 2004-05-26 11:44 AM


very sweetly touching

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6 posted 2004-05-26 01:32 PM



"No one knows all the thoughts
going through places in her heart."

I really liked that
It has been awhile since I've been here, it's nice seeing your words again.

Tara

Susan
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7 posted 2004-05-26 02:55 PM


I really like this.  Touching.  Beautiful.

Smiles -- Susan

The whole of the Universe resides within each individual heart.

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