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Open Poetry #32

I Think Sometimes I Was Born Missing You

icebox
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since 2003-05-03

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in the shadows

0 posted 2004-05-24 11:54 PM

waking with a storm

such slow impatient thunder

shook a deep felt want

©2004 by icebox

Marge Tindal

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since 1999-11-06

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Florida's Foreverly Shores

1 posted 2004-05-25 12:19 PM

IceBox~
The all of this shook me to the realize that I have known this feeling~
Thank you for being a poet~
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost,
the spirit rejoices over what it has left.
- Sufi epigram <))><

noles1@totcon.com

TerryW
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since 2000-03-23

Posts 779
Louisville, Mississippi, USA

2 posted 2004-05-25 12:21 PM

I love this! Such moving thoughts in very few lines -- true poetry!

~you reached inside, you touched my heart,
and I am all the better for it~
Terry A. Woodson, Jr.

iliana
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since 2003-12-05

Posts 13434
USA

3 posted 2004-05-25 12:34 PM

Again, you've done it -- startled me to my senses.....yeah, what is that anyway?! Well, I have my theories.

Beki
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since 1999-09-15

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Newport Beach, CA, USA

4 posted 2004-05-25 01:20 AM

I love the title and while haiku/senyru is supposed to work without a title, this one does.....love the last line

Kaoru

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since 2003-06-07

Posts 3892
where the wild flowers grow

5 posted 2004-05-25 01:27 AM

*sigh....

And such is life, isn't it?

Just another droplet added to the sea.

passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26

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displaced

6 posted 2004-05-25 04:48 AM

the storm is always there

ethome
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since 2000-05-14

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New Brunswick Canada

7 posted 2004-05-25 04:50 AM

Yep, too true...good write!

gemjop
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since 2002-11-18

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Pencilveinia, USA

8 posted 2004-05-28 01:36 PM

a storm that never passes.

another to keep.

Enchantress
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Canada eh.

9 posted 2004-05-28 01:42 PM

Understanding exactly what you mean.

Susan
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since 2004-03-27

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walking the surreal

10 posted 2004-05-28 02:50 PM

Enjoyed this.

Smiles -- Susan

The whole of the Universe resides within each individual heart.

Endlessecho
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since 2003-09-05

Posts 398
I live within myself

11 posted 2004-05-28 04:38 PM

I'm chilled. Amazing write!

Martie

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California

12 posted 2004-05-28 05:22 PM

icebox

A nod at the title and the poem understood.

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