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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines 
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It's no illusion, the missing I do of you, the hope I have that rests inside bending my thoughts around memories. It's all I have to whet my appetite, to sharpen the appeal, the allure always there in my view of you. I watched the ray-spread behind the clouds, the sun holding its own despite the threat of storm and I thought of how you came into my life. You raided my words, invaded my mind conquering my heart with your seductive manner. You are my twist of serenity when I feel your touch and the look in your eyes that speaks louder than words. You are my "if only" as I meander, weaving my way through the heaviness that is you. M "Love is not blind - It sees more and not less, but because it sees more, it is willing to see less." (Will Moss) |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
MzWynter~ This is a most beautiful penning~ You continue to write from the heart of such a lovely person ... you best yourself with this one~ *Huglets*  ~*Marge*~ ~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost, |
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TerryW Senior Member
since 2000-03-23
Posts 779Louisville, Mississippi, USA |
Absolutely Beautiful! I can feel the emotion! Thanks for this! ~you reached inside, you touched my heart, |
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GG Member Elite
since 2002-12-03
Posts 3532Lost in thought |
You are my "if only" as I meander, weaving my way through the heaviness that is you. I love it all, but the end of this just grabs me... Beautiful, Maureen Always, Alyssa Poems are made by fools like me, |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
A heart and soul as beautiful as yours, Dear Maureen, deserve your "If Only"s to "Be"... Lovin' hugs, Linda |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
gawd! I KNOW what you mean! |
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Professor Gloom Member Elite
since 2000-07-23
Posts 3082of Depression |
Nice poem, Enjoyed the reading As usual. This needs a bump Gloom |
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Dark Kisses Member
since 2001-06-24
Posts 364Flat lands of Kansas |
Beautiful words written (I shall bump again)  A friend, like a candle, is most needed in the darkness. |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Very, very beautioful, Maureen. I love this.  Hugs, Ethel |
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inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio |
ahh those 'if only' i know what you mean nice work here |
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rosepetals25
since 2000-05-31
Posts 3076PA |
oooo I reallyyyy like this! Tara  |
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INclan Senior Member
since 1999-07-20
Posts 1024Indiana, USA |
Very well done.... INclan |
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time prophet Member
since 2003-07-30
Posts 371In New Zealand Amongst the Ancient Trees |
Nice one "M" |
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