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Susan
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walking the surreal

0 posted 2004-05-24 03:07 PM



you comfort me
in your acceptance
of everything I am

and, yes

you surprise me
to see you
still standing here

i know

i am not easy
too much work
some will say

but you

you love me
arms wide open
and i am carried

by the strength of you

S.A.T.


The whole of the Universe resides within each individual heart.

[This message has been edited by Susan (05-25-2004 02:54 PM).]

© Copyright 2004 s.a.t. - All Rights Reserved
TerryW
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Louisville, Mississippi, USA
1 posted 2004-05-24 03:09 PM


Beautiful!  I love this!

~you reached inside, you touched my heart,
and I am all the better for it~
Terry A. Woodson, Jr.

Enchantress
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2 posted 2004-05-24 04:33 PM


Oh this is so soft and lovely...
very much enjoyed.
Hugs~

~Somewhere in my heart I'm always
Dancing with you in the summer rain~

Sadelite
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3 posted 2004-05-24 04:36 PM


I love this! And off to the races to the library with this beauty!  Thanks!
           Sadie

garysgirl
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4 posted 2004-05-25 07:41 PM


Susan, this is beautiful. It's good to
know that you are loved this way.
(like your photo, too!)
Hugs,

Midnitesun
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Gaia
5 posted 2004-05-25 10:52 PM


I missed your entrance here at Pips. Nice to meet you, Susan.
I like the straightforward honest feel in this write. Hope to read more from your pen, meanwhile? hello

Dark Angel
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6 posted 2004-05-25 11:26 PM


Absolutely lovely Susan, such a delicate write.

Maree

The clouds never expect it when it rains, but the sea, changes colour, but the sea, does not change.
~Stevie Nicks~

Susan
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walking the surreal
7 posted 2004-05-26 12:30 PM


Thank you.  This one is very close to the heart.  Most are, but some are deeper than others.  I appreciate your kind replies.

Smiles -- Susan

The whole of the Universe resides within each individual heart.

Suetang
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since 2001-03-07
Posts 5187
Melbourne, Australia
8 posted 2004-05-26 12:40 PM


So beautifully expressed, Susan.

Take care........Sue

I am in motion
I am blue
Love is an ocean
I'm anchored in you
- Shawn Mullins

passing shadows
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9 posted 2004-05-26 03:00 AM


indeed

lovely write

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