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HopeS
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since 2000-12-22
Posts 4596
Perth Western Australia

0 posted 2004-05-24 01:03 PM



I Can't Help But Wonder

Thoughts we can never see
Unless we choose to reveal
I can't help but wonder
How much you conceal

When being kept from view
Thoughts remain a mystery
I can't help but wonder
Are you  thinking of me

The thoughts upon my mind
I am always able to express
I can't help but wonder
Do you think of me less

When counting on thoughts
There is much we can bare
I can't help but wonder
Are you willing to share

HopeĀ©2004


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Margherita
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since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236
Eternity
1 posted 2004-05-24 01:10 PM


You express beautifully what happens to all the longing hearts in love, dear Hope, we wonder ...
Love and hugs. Margherita

Susan
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since 2004-03-27
Posts 5104
walking the surreal
2 posted 2004-05-24 02:50 PM


Thoughts we can never see
Unless we choose to reveal
I can't help but wonder
How much you conceal

This speaks to me and my nature.  I'm always wondering what others are thinking.  Enjoyed.

Smiles -- Susan

The whole of the Universe resides within each individual heart.

TerryW
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since 2000-03-23
Posts 779
Louisville, Mississippi, USA
3 posted 2004-05-24 03:13 PM


Beautiful!  Words that touch my heart...

~you reached inside, you touched my heart,
and I am all the better for it~
Terry A. Woodson, Jr.

passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26
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displaced
4 posted 2004-05-25 12:38 PM


mystery can be good...sometimes
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