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Aimster
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0 posted 2004-05-24 08:36 AM


Life deals us all a hand of cards
It is up to us how we play that hand
For me, it's never been a question
On my own two feet I stand

I'm neither strong nor brave
I just move on from day to day
Sometimes I look up at the sky
And wonder why things end up a certain way

Though I carry pain inside
It's a smile I wear on my face
For at the end of it all
Living on this earth isn't such a bad place

I often wonder about love and life
Why is it the things I want escape me
Yet in some strange way I continue on
I find peace in knowing that I'm free

Free from what I'm not sure of
The confusion hounds me as I write on this page
I guess I just realise that life is real
We aren't actors on a stage

Reality sometimes hits hard
It crashes into our world of make believe
Sometimes things are the way they seem
Other times they are far from how they are percieved

"When life gives you sorrow, may you experience the spirit of laughter"

© Copyright 2004 Amy Kennedy - All Rights Reserved
Enchantress
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1 posted 2004-05-24 08:58 AM


Excellent write Amy....very much enjoyed.
~Smiles & Hugs, Nancy~

~Somewhere in my heart I'm always
Dancing with you in the summer rain~

Sunshine
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2 posted 2004-05-24 04:05 PM


It's indeed a world of vast confusion
any more...
I hereby certify that all insane people
truly make more sense
than the sane ones.

And I should know!

Sadelite
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3 posted 2004-05-24 04:15 PM


Aimster,
Sometimes things are the way they seem
Other times they are far from how they are percieved

   Isn't this the truth?  I really liked your outlook on things and the way you presented it in your poetry.  Live each day to the fullest it seems to say...Enjoyed
         Sadie

Dark Angel
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4 posted 2004-05-24 05:01 PM


This is great Amygirl...one day at a time might be the way to go eh...

Nice to read you again.

Maree

The clouds never expect it when it rains, but the sea, changes colour, but the sea, does not change.
~Stevie Nicks~

JL
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5 posted 2004-05-24 05:35 PM


“I'm neither strong nor brave
I just move on from day to day
Sometimes I look up at the sky
And wonder why things end up a certain way”

A lot said here!  Enjoyed your write!

JL

She said: ”You look cute in the dark.”


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State of constant confusion!
6 posted 2004-05-25 12:48 PM


Well, look who the cat drug in LOL

Hiya Amy, long time no see. IT is nice to see that you have not lost your poetic touch, I have always enjoyed reading your words.

Hope all is well with you.

Jeff

TerryW
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7 posted 2004-05-25 12:50 PM


Lovely words,from a lovely poetess!  

~you reached inside, you touched my heart,
and I am all the better for it~
Terry A. Woodson, Jr.

ParisGrl
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8 posted 2004-05-25 03:04 PM


Amy,

Hey you!  hope all is ok with you.  If you'd like to chat sometime.  my e-mail address is ParisGrl78@aol.com.  Great to read your work again!  Missed seeing you.

~Laura~

Aimster
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9 posted 2004-05-25 09:21 PM


thank you all for your kind and as always supportive words...i can always come back to this place, knowing people here understand me. i'll try to post more as time allows...just a very busy woman these days, new job, etc.
take care. and again thank you all.
Amy

"When life gives you sorrow, may you experience the spirit of laughter"

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10 posted 2004-05-26 04:29 AM


what a brilliant honest write of wisdom!
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11 posted 2004-05-26 06:54 AM


A very good poem, Amy. Made me think
which is a good thing.
Hugs,
Ethel

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12 posted 2004-05-26 07:28 AM


Amy, you are so open and honest, and real and grounded. This write truly is an extension of the beautiful you in you!

It was a pleasure to read your words this morning!

~ May your day be full of wonder and joy!

Loving hugs,
Linda

Seymour Tabin
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13 posted 2004-05-26 07:35 AM


Aimster
A bright and lovely write, enjoyed the read.

Aimster
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14 posted 2004-05-26 09:22 AM


thank you all again for your
kind and heart warming words.
you sure do know how to make a
girl smile
Amy

"When life gives you sorrow, may you experience the spirit of laughter"

nakdthoughts
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15 posted 2004-05-26 11:05 AM


Hi Amy, it is so nice to see and read you.

Hoping all is well...and  I definitely understood these words:

I'm neither strong nor brave
I just move on from day to day
Sometimes I look up at the sky
And wonder why things end up a certain way


M

Aimster
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16 posted 2004-05-26 01:13 PM


thanks M...and nice to see you as well.
Take care
Amy

"When life gives you sorrow, may you experience the spirit of laughter"

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