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icebox
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since 2003-05-03
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in the shadows

0 posted 2004-05-24 12:01 PM



I can't walk the hills

filling memories in your heart

shadows weave the past

©2004 by icebox

© Copyright 2004 icebox - All Rights Reserved
iliana
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since 2003-12-05
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1 posted 2004-05-24 12:39 PM


Yes, I guess, shadows can be very heavy and wisdom shows that it's best if we carry our own weight over the ridge.  Still, it's sad.
Midnitesun
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Gaia
2 posted 2004-05-24 01:30 AM


the shadows follow
no matter where the ridge leads
just the way of life
enjoyed, m'friend, the thoughts within this write

passing shadows
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displaced
3 posted 2004-05-24 04:04 AM



Susan Caldwell
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since 2002-12-27
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4 posted 2004-05-24 07:01 PM


pull the weave that unravels the shadows of the past...

"cast me gently into the morning, for the night has been unkind"
~Sarah McLachlan~

BluesSerenade
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By the Seaside
5 posted 2004-05-27 09:55 PM


It's a steep climb all right~  
I so enjoy pondering your poetry, icebox~

Really nice writing~

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