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Ericc
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0 posted 2004-05-23 03:27 PM



This verge...

A hand stilled against the
motion of the night.

Two sides...constant in their
touch.

We are this verge...at once the sweetest
breeze and again the holy object of
its caress.

There is only this reach.

An edge pressed against the
flesh of meeting worlds.

This verge.



© Copyright 2004 Eric P McCarty - All Rights Reserved
iliana
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1 posted 2004-05-23 03:45 PM


"We are this verge...at once the sweetest
breeze and again the holy object of
its caress."

What a beautiful, complete expression in and of itself!


Susan
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walking the surreal
2 posted 2004-05-23 04:19 PM


Mmmmm . . . beautiful.

Susan

The whole of the Universe resides within each individual heart.

passing shadows
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displaced
3 posted 2004-05-23 05:16 PM


you are the King of the short powerful ones!
Enchantress
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Canada eh.
4 posted 2004-05-23 05:38 PM


"We are this verge...at once the sweetest
breeze and again the holy object of
its caress.

There is only this reach.

An edge pressed against the
flesh of meeting worlds.

This verge."


Oh Eric...this is intensly beautiful.
~Smiles & Hugs, Nancy~

~Somewhere in my heart I'm always
Dancing with you in the summer rain~

Sadelite
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5 posted 2004-05-23 05:56 PM


eric,
  so pure with beauty...wonderful expression!
          Sadie

JamesMichael
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6 posted 2004-05-23 11:59 PM


Very nice...James
Sunshine
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7 posted 2004-05-24 08:48 AM



I read this
several times over
last night...
I think the only word
that was left to me
was

poignant.

Margherita
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since 2003-02-08
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Eternity
8 posted 2004-05-24 09:05 AM


Through your inspired words, dear Eric, I feel I am part of this reach, of this verge. I feel the touch of worlds.
I feel love.
With your divine visions you open new horizons to our perceptions of truth.
I love you.

Margherita

Kazm
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9 posted 2004-05-24 05:46 PM


Some day I will be able to write like you. That is my wish.

                                                 Kaz

ThisDiamond
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since 2002-02-22
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10 posted 2004-06-13 08:57 PM


I so admire your vision and your self expression.  This held greater meaning than the first read I took, which left me speechless.
Wonderful!
TD

Suetang
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since 2001-03-07
Posts 5187
Melbourne, Australia
11 posted 2004-06-14 10:21 PM


Absolutely stunning, Eric.

Take care..........Sue

I am in motion
I am blue
Love is an ocean
I'm anchored in you
- Shawn Mullins

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