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scorpio
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0 posted 2004-05-23 09:18 AM



Your Eyes

In the quiet dark
When moon reflects in your eyes
I seek your essence.


believe in what your heart feels...

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Midnitesun
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1 posted 2004-05-23 09:40 AM


nicely done! good visual
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2 posted 2004-05-23 09:45 AM


scorpio
I agree, good one.

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3 posted 2004-05-23 10:00 AM


very pretty

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4 posted 2004-05-23 10:01 AM


Scorpio, even though these are few words,
they have a very sensual feel.
Hugs,

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5 posted 2004-05-23 10:09 AM


Essence.....something about that word that completes so many thoughts.... Eh? Hmph? Oh, sorry, daydreaming.....

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6 posted 2004-05-23 11:42 AM


Oh so soft and sensual dear scorpio...
Very much enjoyed this lovely.
Good to see your muse has inspired you.
~Smiles, hugs & love ya, Tinker~

Your fingers trace me
as your eyes drink in my curves
...you ask without words

~Somewhere in my heart I'm always
Dancing with you in the summer rain~

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7 posted 2004-05-23 11:46 AM


This has such quite beauty and an Ethereal quality about it.  Like a soft breeze across the skin.  Very nice.

Smiles -- Susan

The whole of the Universe resides within each individual heart.

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8 posted 2004-05-23 11:48 AM


You will get no argument from me.  Perfect!
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9 posted 2004-05-23 12:09 PM


Very rich, Scorio -- I feel the warmth of passion with this one.   ....jo
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10 posted 2004-05-23 01:15 PM



Every time...
every single time
you score.

scorpio
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11 posted 2004-05-23 01:16 PM


Thank you Midnightsun. I'm glad you liked it.

I always appreciate your support Sy. Thanks.

That was very kind of you Muted.  I thank you.

Ethel I welcome your kind comments.

Essence is certainly one of those words that stirs up something.  Thank you Ratleader.

Lovely response Tinker.  Looking into your eyes I would be lost for words.

Thank you Susan.  Very kind of you to comment.

Barry i'm pleased that you liked this. Thank you.

Thank you Iliana.  Much appreciate your warm words.


believe in what your heart feels...

scorpio
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12 posted 2004-05-23 01:19 PM


Karilea thank you.  Very kind of you to say so.

believe in what your heart feels...

Beki
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13 posted 2004-05-23 01:26 PM


This is quite simply beautiful, as is Enchantress' response bravo  both of you!
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14 posted 2004-05-23 01:27 PM


lovely write
scorpio
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15 posted 2004-05-23 04:24 PM


Thank you Beki.  I'm very pleased you liked it.

Dixie your support is always welcomed. Thank you.

believe in what your heart feels...

Enchantress
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16 posted 2004-05-23 10:39 PM


Because this is so beautiful...
and also because your gift of a candy apple was refused.

scorpio
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17 posted 2004-05-23 10:53 PM


Thank you for the bumpTinker...here's a gift for your kindness and encouragement.

believe in what your heart feels...

JamesMichael
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18 posted 2004-05-23 11:44 PM


Ah yes...James
scorpio
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19 posted 2004-05-24 11:25 AM


Thank you James.  I'd glad you stopped in.

believe in what your heart feels...

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