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choshi
Senior Member

since 2004-01-01

Posts 1184
New York

0 posted 2004-05-23 06:43 AM

After the storm,
the earth falls into silence-
as soft breezes rise
and spread across the fields,
the tall pampas sways lightly.

[This message has been edited by choshi (05-23-2004 10:07 AM).]

Sunshine

Administrator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

1 posted 2004-05-23 08:26 AM

It's a beautiful quiet,
after the storm...

NewEnglandlazurlu
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-01-04

Posts 7470
A Mountain Paradise

2 posted 2004-05-23 08:30 AM

I loved this! I could feel the soft breeze and sway.

A wonderfully descriptive write.

Hugs, Marti

If you truly love Nature, you will find
beauty everywhere.
~Vincent Van Gogh ~

inkedgoddess
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-11-19

Posts 7392
Ohio

3 posted 2004-05-23 08:32 AM

After the storm
the earth falls into silence
as soft breezes rise-
and spread across the fields
the tall pampas sways lightly.
*********************************
after the storm
they lay side to side
as if it never happened
*********************************

after enlightenment
time to do the laundry
***********************************
sorry paulie couldnt resist.....

Seymour Tabin
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since 1999-07-07

Posts 31720
Tamarac Fla

4 posted 2004-05-23 09:53 AM

choshi
Good write, enjoyed the read.

garysgirl

Member Laureate

since 2002-09-29

Posts 19237
Florida, USA

5 posted 2004-05-23 10:03 AM

Paul, this is so pretty....
I could see the calm...

Hugs,

passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

6 posted 2004-05-23 01:46 PM

you do these so well

I'm always amazed

iliana
Member Patricius

since 2003-12-05

Posts 13434
USA

7 posted 2004-05-23 01:49 PM

Paul, you've captured my imagination again with this serene beauty!

....jo

Margherita
Member Seraphic

since 2003-02-08

Posts 22236
Eternity

8 posted 2004-05-24 12:51 PM

A beautiful moment indeed.
Love, Margherita

choshi
Senior Member

since 2004-01-01

Posts 1184
New York

9 posted 2004-05-24 05:06 PM

Thank you so much, Sunshine, Marti, Seymour, Inked One,Ethel, Dixie, Jo, Margharita.

I deeply appreciate your ongoing support and encouragement and your wonderfully positive and inspiring energies. More importantly, thank you for your poems.

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