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RobertB Senior Member
since 1999-09-26
Posts 1104Champaign, IL 
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Reborn Of all my summering, forty-nine told Ripe with honey combed For an advancing frost Hived in my memory for another life I recall the one of planted death That I could not harvest A bitter seed sowed in The field of my existence by robber crows Black with guilt punishing me Through Autumn living Scythed with conscious dread Into summers numb with passing Until the farm of myself Received my birth at fifty. Robert |
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Susan Member Ascendant
since 2004-03-27
Posts 5104walking the surreal |
I feel a sense of movement from the dark into the light. I hope this is accurate. I had to read this several times. Very thought provoking. Susan The whole of the Universe resides within each individual heart. |
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Snow
since 2000-10-16
Posts 1170desert flower looking for rain |
could it be... yes, indeed. someone that can feed my mind with actual poetry!! bravo sir, you've found a fan. snow "yet each man kills the thing he loves by each let this be heard, some do it with a bitter look, some with a flattering word" oscar wilde |
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Sadelite Member Elite
since 2003-10-11
Posts 2519 |
Robert, Weather and pests on the farms can never be predictable. Some seasons just test the farmer's strength, and others cause celebration. I'm glad to hear upcoming harvest. Enjoyed. Sadie |
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RobertB Senior Member
since 1999-09-26
Posts 1104Champaign, IL |
Thank you Susan, snow and sadelite. That's 3 readers beginning with "s". Now I WILL get mixed up! I appreciate all your comments. Robert I'll try to feed your mind with substance snow and not junk food. |
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Snow
since 2000-10-16
Posts 1170desert flower looking for rain |
Robert, Please do. As you could see by my lack of responses I've been trying to stay junk food free for some time. But, as I can see, I've now found one more to add to the very few that feed my diet Snow hmm.. thinking i should change my name so i don't get mixed up with other S's *smile* "yet each man kills the thing he loves |
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Ratleader
since 2003-01-23
Posts 7026Visiting Earth on a Guest Pass |
Depth....I like the depth of this, and your lack of fear in presenting it. Like I said before, you I will read for sure. ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸ ¸¸ºº> ~~~(¸¸ER¸¸ºº> |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
it's so good to see you back again |
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RobertB Senior Member
since 1999-09-26
Posts 1104Champaign, IL |
Thanks rl......isn't poetry to purge or exise or just plain let it all hang out?? :-} Thank you Dixie. Robert |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Gawd I enjoy the way you write...deep..good stuff. Hugs~ ~Somewhere in my heart I'm always |
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