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Susan Member Ascendant
since 2004-03-27
Posts 5104walking the surreal 
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Fragile tenuous strings tether my fragile ego to the moor of sanity pray to God no more tempest tossed or I shall be lost a sea S.A.T. It's one of those days.Where's my Fluffy! The whole of the Universe resides within each individual heart. |
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Sadelite Member Elite
since 2003-10-11
Posts 2519 |
Few words, but strong write! I really like how you did this. I hope things go better tomorrow. Sadie |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
love the format here...great theme too |
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RobertB Senior Member
since 1999-09-26
Posts 1104Champaign, IL |
few words can be more powerful than a volume you succeded with few here. Robert |
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James_A_Fraser Senior Member
since 2003-09-03
Posts 972Out Making Anticlines |
....your fluffy...uh...what? Oh, here it is! I want one of those too! |
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garysgirl  
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Susan, this is a powerfully emotional write. I like it. Hugs, Ethel |
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Susan Member Ascendant
since 2004-03-27
Posts 5104walking the surreal |
I do so appreciate the kind words. Thank Heavens the sun is out this morning  Susan The whole of the Universe resides within each individual heart. |
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VAS Member Rara Avis
since 2000-11-16
Posts 7450Oregon |
darn ego, darn heart Wounded Knee has naught on thee grab that sunbeam, now! ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ seems we all get faced with choices continually, eh?! Whether on the shoal or on the shore, I'll seek the lighthouse evermore. |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Emotional strings pulling as if to bind one Yet, we break away ~*~ For you, Susan. |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
I know....who am I to talk? Sheesh, but I do believe that better moments are ahead and better days linger just behind.... though our roads always seem to have a pothole or two that we must swerve to miss. |
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Ericc Member Elite
since 2003-01-31
Posts 4178 |
Wow...!! Eric |
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scorpio Member Ascendant
since 2002-10-02
Posts 5178right...there |
Hold on and believe. Well done. believe in what your heart feels... |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
Very beautifully penned, Susan. I'll keep you in my prayers.  .....jo |
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Susan Member Ascendant
since 2004-03-27
Posts 5104walking the surreal |
You've warmed my heart My smile is bright Yellow again sheds it's precious light Thank you all so very much. Smiles-- susan The whole of the Universe resides within each individual heart. |
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