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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738
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I foresee a problem here "Indicative" of me I'm told... my progressions made too quick I never learned to drive a stick graceful in the jagged "H" hugging all these curves of road as all the little pretties flash before the tires bump that code of danger just beneath the wheels bump bump bump the thrill of real congealing test of razored edge hasty pressed the power brake and the slip of grip in space begging one soft shoulder cry pray two wheels will be enough and shrug the readiness to die-- laughter and the radio shattering the dream. |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
I never really know what to say when I read you...sigh |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
I never learned to drive a stick =============================== thats ok....cuz you sure learned how to rhyme.  No one holds the road and takes the hairpin curves like you do.  |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
serenity, I can only gather you like to ride the edge. You must have a collection of tickets. LOL |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
I don't know Karen... you seem to hug that center line very well. Excellent write. Hugs~ ~Somewhere in my heart I'm always |
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icebox Member Elite
since 2003-05-03
Posts 4383in the shadows |
Every day should be a good day to die, yes? |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
LOL, this one woke me up, remembering a not-so-soft-shoulder-skid, circular spinning then exiting the highway backwards on black ice heading for a ditch of unknown depths. I am wide awake again.  |
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brian sites Senior Member
since 2002-06-25
Posts 1475usa |
soft shoulder hug.... stop the car.... at this next rest stop get out and stretch the legs...  ? |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
smile and blush... I don't even know how to drive at all (another phobia) funny tho, I still manage to grind my gears, and nodding, even walking, I can't seem to slow down the pace of things. Thanks for reading, kind poets.  |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
Serenity Blaze -- Midnight's comment above about says it all for me. Your words are always so well chosen and you have such a way with them!  ....joPS: Hang on with that two-wheel curve. |
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Kaoru
since 2003-06-07
Posts 3892where the wild flowers grow |
Okay, you.. are amazing. I probably said this before but, never hurts to say it again. |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Ok, that's my next job... getting you to not only drive a stick, but anything else we can find... because darlin' girl, the minute you feel that control... your verse will find another dimension... and then there's more for us to enjoy! |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
Ok I was trying to quote my favourite lines but found myself quoting the whole. You always leave me speechless Gorgeousness. Mxx The clouds never expect it when it rains, but the sea, changes colour, but the sea, does not change. |
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Susan Member Ascendant
since 2004-03-27
Posts 5104walking the surreal |
Your words create a most vivid picture and I can find myself behind the wheel. Much fun. Susan The whole of the Universe resides within each individual heart. |
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Balladeer
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
e-mail me, ok? |
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