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Love Angel
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since 2003-11-04
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0 posted 2004-05-21 06:17 PM


Father, this is my prayer to You,
Give me the strength to stand.
I give my soul to only You,
My life is Yours to mend.

On my knees, I open my heart to You.
Here I am, I surrender to You.

Father, I will follow You,
I can't make it on my own.
Left in the dark, now I need You,
I will live by You alone.

On my knees, I open my heart to You,
Here I am, I surrender to You.

Father, my heart cries out for You,
No longer will I be afraid.
Made the choice to worship You,
By Your stripes I'm healed and saved.

On my knees, I open my heart to You,
Here I am, I surrender to You, Oh Lord.


This is more like a song than a poem.  Please tell me what you think, and be honest.



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Margherita
Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236
Eternity
1 posted 2004-05-21 06:47 PM


I think this is a very beautiful prayer poem.

Sweet surrendering.

Beautifully written.

Love, Margherita

Susan
Member Ascendant
since 2004-03-27
Posts 5104
walking the surreal
2 posted 2004-05-21 07:45 PM


A beautiful statement of love for your Lord.  Enjoyed.

Smiles -- Susan

The whole of the Universe resides within each individual heart.

JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA
3 posted 2004-05-22 12:30 PM


Silky...a beautiful flow...James
passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26
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displaced
4 posted 2004-05-23 05:53 AM


I think it's beautiful
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