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muted
since 2004-01-15
Posts 2949Elapsing, Eclipsing, Evolving 
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my hands are too small to hold the world so i let it fall to find that gravity is more indifferent than originally implied and the earth sits peacefully upon it's orbit without concern for me or my weaknesses or the implicit need I have to carry unnecessary burden. |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
You have such a wonderful way of looking and dealing with things... How I would love to view the world through your eyes. Very nicely penned. Hugs~ ~Somewhere in my heart I'm always |
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Endlessecho Member
since 2003-09-05
Posts 398I live within myself |
Ah... I so feel this poem. But you can so well express it. Wonderful! |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Strange, how we bring our own troubles along when we could so easily let them slip to the side of the road. |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
"so i let it fall to find that gravity is more indifferent than originally implied and the earth sits peacefully upon it's orbit" ah you see.. but gravity is why in part the earth sits upon its orbit and all things ruled by more than we are in time.find their own balance.. can you? :-) |
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Susan Caldwell Member Rara Avis
since 2002-12-27
Posts 8348Florida |
Oh Dawn!! This is great!! Love it! "click" "cast me gently into the morning, for the night has been unkind" |
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wranx Member Elite
since 2002-06-07
Posts 3689Moved from a shack to a barn |
Yes, let fall the world. Nice! |
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Susan Member Ascendant
since 2004-03-27
Posts 5104walking the surreal |
I absolutely love this and all it implies. Smiles -- Susan  The whole of the Universe resides within each individual heart. |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
beautiful...the way of things and allowance is such a deep mystery...balance prevails...wonderfully written |
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eor Senior Member
since 2002-09-26
Posts 959blues & greys |
absoutly beautiful Beauty is truth, truth beauty |
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JL Member Ascendant
since 2004-04-01
Posts 6128Texas, USA |
Sometimes we just try too hard. But sometimes we need to at least try. A lesson learned for me in this write. Thank you! JL  She said: ”You look cute in the dark.” |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Dear Dawn, whether we carry our burdens or release them, the Earth won't notice, but I'm sure she prefers "light" feet ... You are so beautiful and insightful. Love and hugs. Margherita |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
I so feel this poem too... I see you Dawn, just take it one step at a time  Maree The clouds never expect it when it rains, but the sea, changes colour, but the sea, does not change. |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
beautiful you |
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Sadelite Member Elite
since 2003-10-11
Posts 2519 |
the meaning, your depth... I agree with Capt Hair's response to this... Enjoyed your thoughts...they always make me ponder! /sadie |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
Muted -- jaw dropping here. WOW!  ...jo |
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