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Seymour Tabin
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0 posted 2004-05-21 07:14 AM


Ride the Eight

The mist has formed a figure eight
The wiggle of a mental state
Ride the figure ring the chime
Hear the bells of father time.

See the visions of a star
Bring it close to where you are
Light the passage of your night
Chase the shadows from your sight

Be what ever you would choose
There’s nothing here for you to lose
What is given will recede
You are nothing but a weed

Grab the light and make it yours
Hear the wander of applause
Charge the windmill of your seem
Be the winner in your dream

Perhaps a little over spread
But then again it’s better said


© Copyright 2004 Seymour Tabin - All Rights Reserved
scorpio
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1 posted 2004-05-21 08:46 AM


And no one says it better than you Sy.  Well done.

believe in what your heart feels...

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2 posted 2004-05-21 09:19 AM


Wonderful wonderful morning write Sy!
Much enjoyed as always.
~Morning hugs & tea, Nancy~

~Somewhere in my heart I'm always
Dancing with you in the summer rain~

Sunshine
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3 posted 2004-05-21 09:39 AM


Grab the light and make it yours
Hear the wander of applause
Charge the windmill of your seem
Be the winner in your dream

~*~

And in the lazy eight of time
infinity becomes yours and mine
to do with what we will and all
until that 8 stands up straight and tall...

ripples come and circles grow
Sy leaves poems, that truth we know.



zenny
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4 posted 2004-05-21 10:14 AM


enjoyed this
zenny

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5 posted 2004-05-21 11:14 AM


Be the winner in your dream

Do you have connect-the-dot directions on how to do that, dear friend? *S* If only! *S*
Excellent write! *S*

passing shadows
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6 posted 2004-05-21 12:11 PM


afternoon Sy...wonderful write
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7 posted 2004-05-21 12:13 PM


Beautiful, as always, my friend.
Hugs,

Susan Caldwell
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8 posted 2004-05-21 01:36 PM


yep!  


"cast me gently into the morning, for the night has been unkind"
~Sarah McLachlan~

iliana
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9 posted 2004-05-23 02:56 AM


Could not have been "better said"!  Much enjoyed, Seymour!   ....jo
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