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Sunshine
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0 posted 2004-05-20 10:53 PM



Her Purpose



Tenacity and drive,
                  then soulful and in mourning,
we sense artistic severance
of a poet

in kind.

On some days, she is clarity;
                  other hours find her in scattered fractions,
a bit softer around the edges,
but puzzled at life, trying to pull pieces
together.

She binds me to her
with awe-tight love lines, her love,
                 her faith,
even in her shattered light lines ~

to thank God for her
         would be to underline her purpose here…

to teach, and guide
              through heartache, and losses,

counting blessings, she does,
like plucking petals from a daisy’s bloom

does He love me; yes, He does
even when love lights dim

she still finds her Purpose,
gilds the lily,
scents our senses,
soothes sorrows,
lifts lives,
and prays love forward.

~*~

for Martie, who won’t let me tell a very special fact…

© Copyright 2004 Karilea Rilling Jungel - All Rights Reserved
Susan
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1 posted 2004-05-20 11:02 PM


A lovely tribute beautifully written as always.

Smiles -- Susan

The whole of the Universe resides within each individual heart.

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2 posted 2004-05-20 11:05 PM


Yes, all of this, and more. A beautiful picture of a beautiful lady.

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3 posted 2004-05-20 11:50 PM


Sunshine,
  This is so befitting Martie, such beautiful person with a gorgeous heart.  She's lucky to have you as a friend and visa versa!   Beautiful poetry, Karilea!
              Sadie

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4 posted 2004-05-21 12:24 PM


Simply gorgeous!
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5 posted 2004-05-21 12:30 PM


"she still finds her Purpose,
gilds the lily,
scents our senses,
soothes sorrows,
lifts lives,
and prays love forward."

~ Martie does, indeed! You both personify the word "Love".


Linda

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6 posted 2004-05-21 12:34 PM


Nice writing...James
Martie
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7 posted 2004-05-21 01:42 AM


Karilea dear sis........I really don't have words right now except thank you for being you...and for your love.  

PS...You can tell if you want to.


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8 posted 2004-05-21 02:20 AM


a beautiful gift
Sunshine
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10 posted 2004-05-21 08:54 AM


Touching tribute..

believe in what your heart feels...

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11 posted 2004-05-21 09:04 AM


Sunshine,
A lovely, lovely write.

kayjay
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12 posted 2004-05-21 09:10 AM


That women can be so warm to each other, out of pure friendship, is both heartwarming and something that is simply foreign to men.  We are the poorer for that.  sigh Ken

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The yawn of a dawn will hasten the light

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13 posted 2004-05-21 09:17 AM


A beautiful tribute to a very deserving lady.
Yes indeed Martie is all this and more!
~Hugs to you both~

zenny
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14 posted 2004-05-21 10:15 AM


beautiful tribute!
as always i love reading u

zenny

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15 posted 2004-05-21 11:30 AM


I don't think an announcement of good news could be lovelier. *S*
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16 posted 2004-05-21 02:54 PM


wow, Sunshine, how marvelously flowing with beauty and love.  We are better for our frienships...and those angels we are blessed with...

How lovely a read this was, not to mention, a world of love given.  Thank you for writing and sharing

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17 posted 2004-05-21 05:31 PM


This Karilea, is a very beautiful tribute to our lovely flower girl... Martie.

Thankyou

Maree

The clouds never expect it when it rains, but the sea, changes colour, but the sea, does not change.
~Stevie Nicks~

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18 posted 2004-05-21 07:42 PM


"On some days, she is clarity;
                  other hours find her in scattered fractions,
a bit softer around the edges,
but puzzled at life, trying to pull pieces
together."

Man, this describes me

I loved it!!!!!

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19 posted 2004-05-21 09:35 PM


She certainly does, and this is absolutely gorgeous, Karilea!!!!

Earth's crammed with heaven, and every common bush afire with God, but only he who sees takes off his shoes.
Elizabeth Barrett Browning

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20 posted 2004-05-22 01:30 AM


This is beautiful, and kind.. something that always will remind me of you.
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21 posted 2004-05-22 01:33 AM


yanno, I felt Martie in this after reading only three lines

so I wasn't surprised at the ending comment

what a beauty
from a beauty about a beauty

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22 posted 2004-05-22 07:29 AM


How beautiful this is, Karilea.
Such a tribute to our sweet Martie.
Hugs to you both,

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