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VAS
Member Rara Avis
since 2000-11-16
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0 posted 2004-05-20 10:23 AM



Tranquility’s Repast

out of a gentle spring rain
comes peaceful calm,
nourishment to the soul,
a hush to the heart

may we feast to our fill
until we spill its beauty
about our paths
sating this world
burying its needless pain

©May 20, 2004

Whether on the shoal or on the shore,
I'll seek the lighthouse evermore.

© Copyright 2004 Virginia Salter - All Rights Reserved
nakdthoughts
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since 2000-10-29
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Between the Lines
1 posted 2004-05-20 11:40 AM


a lovely write, Virginia...

enjoyed the calm of it this morning

*s
M

ThisDiamond
Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
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Michigan, USA
2 posted 2004-05-20 11:54 AM


so pretty
TD

passing shadows
Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
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displaced
3 posted 2004-05-20 12:38 PM


the imagery here is wonderful...gave me back a memory or two
JL
Member Ascendant
since 2004-04-01
Posts 6128
Texas, USA
4 posted 2004-05-20 12:45 PM


Very, very nice.  Great read.

JL

She said: ”You look cute in the dark.”


Ericc
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since 2003-01-31
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5 posted 2004-05-20 01:48 PM


Amen.

Eric

iliana
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since 2003-12-05
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6 posted 2004-05-20 06:11 PM


Yes, may we!  Beautifully written!   ...jo
Susan
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since 2004-03-27
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walking the surreal
7 posted 2004-05-20 08:29 PM


out of a gentle spring rain
comes peaceful calm,
nourishment to the soul,
a hush to the heart

Mmmm, you've captured the feeling so well.

Susan

The whole of the Universe resides within each individual heart.

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