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Seymour Tabin
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0 posted 2004-05-20 07:13 AM


Chariots

White chariots race today
With red and gold in spore display
Racing towards horizons goal
Through its gate into my soul

I seek the glories of the sky
Jockeying my thoughts imply
Pacing me a daily run
Underneath the giving sun

I wander through the green of life
Dancing to a players fife
Picking flowers on the way
Each and every precious day

I know not how the answers lie
I only know a life’s imply
And I am drifting in a wend
Where seems a superficial end?

But life to me is more somehow
Then furrowing a field in plough

© Copyright 2004 Seymour Tabin - All Rights Reserved
GG
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1 posted 2004-05-20 07:16 AM


Good morning dear Sir
I love to read these daily offerings you give.
They never disappoint!

Always, Alyssa

Poems are made by fools like me,
But only God can make a tree.
                  Joyce kilmer

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2 posted 2004-05-20 08:42 AM


Morning Sy!
Very much enjoyed this morning's read.
~Morning hugs & tea, Nancy~

~Somewhere in my heart I'm always
Dancing with you in the summer rain~

scorpio
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right...there
3 posted 2004-05-20 08:43 AM


Yes Sy...life is much more.  Well done.

believe in what your heart feels...

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4 posted 2004-05-20 08:47 AM


A wonderful read
Decaflame
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5 posted 2004-05-20 08:50 AM


I wander through the green of life
Dancing to a players fife
Picking flowers on the way
Each and every precious day

~*~

You are such a sweetheart...
leaving petals behind that we can find the way...

iliana
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6 posted 2004-05-20 09:11 AM


Thanks for the "walk" through the clouds this morning, Seymour.   ....jo
passing shadows
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displaced
7 posted 2004-05-20 12:42 PM


life is more
JL
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8 posted 2004-05-20 12:44 PM


So much more.  Great write.

JL

She said: ”You look cute in the dark.”


Seymour Tabin
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9 posted 2004-05-20 02:18 PM


Alyssa,
You are a love, thank you.

Nancy,
Morning sweet,

scorpio
Thanks for the well done.

Marshalzu
Thanks for the wonderful.

Decaflame
I figured if I left crumbs the birds would eat them, LOL

iliana
Thank you sweety.

passing,
Yes life is more.

JL
Thanks for the great.

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