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muted
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0 posted 2004-05-20 01:49 AM




Photo taken by ~Me~ just this morning
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Orange leaves spreading
colour's warmth across branches
in mimic of sun.

© Copyright 2004 Dawn van Krieken-Smith - All Rights Reserved
Jeffrey Carter
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1 posted 2004-05-20 02:03 AM


This poem is as pretty as the photo that inspired it. You have a talented eye as well as a talented mind.
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2 posted 2004-05-20 02:08 AM


ditto what Jeff said
a lovely write and photo

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4 posted 2004-05-20 03:12 AM


beautiful!
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5 posted 2004-05-20 05:43 AM


Very nice photo indeed, b-e-a-utiful
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6 posted 2004-05-20 05:58 AM


Very Beautiful...Dawn.

Maree

The clouds never expect it when it rains, but the sea, changes colour, but the sea, does not change.
~Stevie Nicks~

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7 posted 2004-05-20 08:20 AM


You have painted a beautiful scene and have placed me there....Brava!  ~P

Orange leaves spreading
colour's warmth across branches
in mimic of sun.

~~~~~<@>~~~~~

Dawn sky,
in the rising sun's light;
colour of leaves.

~P


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8 posted 2004-05-20 08:49 AM


Lovely Dawn...
It's hard to imagine it's fall where you are..
until I see the crimson leaves in the picture.
~Smiles & Hugs, Nancy~

~Somewhere in my heart I'm always
Dancing with you in the summer rain~

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9 posted 2004-05-20 09:20 AM


Muted Cuted One -- not only are you a grand poetess, but also a good photographer.  Enjoyed!   ....jo
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10 posted 2004-05-20 10:09 AM


sometimes simple can be more beautiful than the most exstensive metaphors, this is one of thoes times.

"So what befalls the flawless?
Look what I've built, it shines so beautifully now watch as it destroys me."

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You know why I'm smiling, right?
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