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Foxyoasis
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0 posted 2004-05-31 02:36 AM





The smile upon my face
how it never shone so
brilliant with you
the constant happiness
that embraces me when
your around.

How great I feel like
a soaring eagle in the
wide blue skies. The sun
shines down on us as we
day dream and look up
on the clouds.

We see each other's
souls in our eyes
your hands how they
comfort me in my times
of need the graceful
way of your voice to
sooth my tears.

Your the one that
makes it all worth
the wild again.

[This message has been edited by Foxyoasis (05-31-2004 05:28 AM).]

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passing shadows
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1 posted 2004-05-31 02:45 AM


wow! thanks for sharing this part of you! lovely!
iliana
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2 posted 2004-05-31 02:48 AM


Julie -- this was precious!  Wow, you're a lucky couple!   ....jo

[This message has been edited by iliana (05-31-2004 05:27 AM).]

Foxyoasis
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3 posted 2004-05-31 03:35 AM


ty not a couple yet though hehe
MGROVES
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4 posted 2004-05-31 05:25 AM


yes precious


Foxyoasis
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5 posted 2004-05-31 05:28 AM


ty
Michelle_loves_Mike
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6 posted 2004-05-31 09:56 AM


Truely, there is no more wonderful of a feeling, than the shivers you get, looking into the eyes of love

Michelle

I wish all could find the true happiness I have found,,in the eyes of Mike

SwEeTnSeXy18
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7 posted 2004-05-31 10:05 AM


Foxyoasis: This is very romantic and lovely. If only we all were as lucky in love as you. Treasure this and never let it go! Take care.

Lisa

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8 posted 2004-05-31 10:34 AM


beautiful love song...truly enjoyed
this!
take care,
amy

"When life gives you sorrow, may you experience the spirit of laughter"

Foxyoasis
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9 posted 2004-05-31 03:18 PM


Thanks guy's I'm glad you like it I was hesitate about posting it coz i wasnt sure if it was any good.
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