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Susan
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0 posted 2004-05-18 08:39 PM



What can be said
Of the touch of your heart
As it embraces my own
In its tenderness and concern

What can be said
Of the gentle words spoken
Soft and caressing
In their acceptance and welcome

What can be said
Of the affection you inspire
By the passions you share
As you encourage my aspirations

What can be said
Of your soul laid bare
Open and accessible
To cradle my insecurities

What can be said?
Only this . . .
I love you

S.A.T.

The whole of the Universe resides within each individual heart.

© Copyright 2004 s.a.t. - All Rights Reserved
Marge Tindal
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1 posted 2004-05-18 09:01 PM


Susan~
Seems you've tenderly said it all~
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost,
the spirit rejoices over what it has left.
- Sufi epigram <))><

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nakdthoughts
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2 posted 2004-05-18 10:14 PM


You've said it all~~~

*s
M

ThisDiamond
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3 posted 2004-05-18 10:41 PM


Said so much with three little words...
Nicely done.
TD

pictureme
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4 posted 2004-05-18 10:45 PM


It seems to me you said it all
in the very last line!
This reminded me of the song.....
"you say it best when you say nothing at all"........do you know the song?
powerful ending says everything!
pictureme :-)

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5 posted 2004-05-18 10:50 PM



enjoyed this

JamesMichael
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6 posted 2004-05-19 01:07 AM


Lovely...James
passing shadows
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7 posted 2004-05-19 02:24 AM


this is precious
iliana
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8 posted 2004-05-19 02:40 AM


Susan -- this was such a sweet poem!  Thanks for sharing.   ....jo
JamesMichael
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9 posted 2004-05-23 11:41 PM


Revisiting...this soft and tender piece...James
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