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LeeJ
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since 2003-06-19
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0 posted 2004-05-18 03:21 PM


Mind rides the swing
Between cognizant and unaware
Superstition pedals between the trees
Where winds helm in hours of darkness

Streams of energy, miasmas and light
Shifting forms of life, where do they meet?
Which one will take me home tonight?
Is a treasure really lost?
Or is its loss part of a Master’s Plan?

I delve deep into the ocean to identify fish
Asking questions, and their theory of form.
Which mirrors naturally the way things are
Finding room to move into the next realm

Universal forms a dynamic process by transformations
Which requires something to cause metamorphosis
So who wins or looses?  Ultimately any substance attributes
Moving into something new, the whole nature of goodness


© Copyright 2004 Lee J. - All Rights Reserved
iliana
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since 2003-12-05
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1 posted 2004-05-18 03:27 PM


There is something about this that reminds me very much of the lessons Merlin gave to young King Arthur, though they were a cartoon -- those lessons were real ones.  This is another for me to read and re-read -- much enjoyed and appreciated!   ...jo
JL
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since 2004-04-01
Posts 6128
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2 posted 2004-05-18 05:20 PM


"Streams of energy, miasmas and light
Shifting forms of life, where do they meet?
Which one will take me home tonight?
Is a treasure really lost?
Or is its loss part of a Master’s Plan?"

Beautiful!  The entire poem is beautiful, but this verse stands out.
Enjoyed this very much.

JL

She said: ”You look cute in the dark.”


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