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garysgirl
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0 posted 2004-05-18 03:01 PM


In the darkness groping
Searching for light of day
Wondering when in actuality
There will ever be a way

To span the space between
Making together close
The way their hearts desire
The way they would have chose

Between daughter and Mother
A bond between the hearts
Though forces tried to break
Into separate parts

The ties could not be broken
Love is stronger between the two
Darkness will have to leave
For light will come shining through


© Copyright 2004 Ethel GG Kent - All Rights Reserved
iliana
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1 posted 2004-05-18 03:05 PM


This is my thought for today -- thank you, Ethel!  
JL
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2 posted 2004-05-18 03:11 PM


A poetic blessing for sure!
Enjoyed.

JL

She said: ”You look cute in the dark.”


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3 posted 2004-05-19 01:01 PM


nice
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4 posted 2004-05-19 01:05 PM


Ethel,
A delight to read.

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5 posted 2004-05-19 01:11 PM


Ethel, there is most certainly a bond between mother and daughter which cannot be broken.
Beautifully penned sweet lady.
Hugs~

~Somewhere in my heart I'm always
Dancing with you in the summer rain~

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6 posted 2004-05-19 01:55 PM



I understand, honey...I truly do.

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7 posted 2004-05-19 02:09 PM


Very well written.  I have a daughter, and understand this all too well!  Very much enjoyed, Ethel!
        Sadie

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8 posted 2004-05-19 04:00 PM


so well said, thank you for sharing

((hugs))
Charisma

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9 posted 2004-05-19 04:27 PM


Darkness begone forevermore! May that Light keep on shining through to brighten your days, Dear One!

~ 'Twas a fine piece of poetry to boot!


Linda

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10 posted 2004-05-19 06:44 PM



lovely

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11 posted 2004-05-19 06:53 PM


And that light that shines between a mother and a daughter just keeps on shining, even when one has passed on.  Lovely write.

Smiles -- Susan

The whole of the Universe resides within each individual heart.

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