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choshi
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0 posted 2004-05-18 11:22 AM



In the spring breeze,
the willows quiver and sigh
despite the distance-
with every breath that you take
ripples spread across my heart.

© Copyright 2004 Paul C. Cooper - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2004-05-18 11:24 AM


Absolutely enchanting!!
Love, Margherita

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2 posted 2004-05-18 11:26 AM


Ripples continue to grow, no matter the distance..the movement just keeps transfering itself, on and on....thats a long way for love to travel...and a wonderful thing to believe...
that im surrounded by the love others send to their intended...i too bask in the warm rippling...
thank you, for allowing me to sit amongst the motions of love

another beautiful contribution Paul

choshi
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3 posted 2004-05-18 11:26 AM


My gosh Margharita, Such a quick and wonderful response.....You strike me wonderfully, like lightning splitting the void......     ~P
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4 posted 2004-05-18 11:29 AM


Ripples continue to grow, no matter the distance..the movement just keeps transfering itself, on and on....thats a long way for love to travel...and a wonderful thing to believe...
that im surrounded by the love others send to their intended...i too bask in the warm rippling...
thank you, for allowing me to sit amongst the motions of love

Thank you Dawn, for your sensitive and thoughtful response....Sometimes, we can just feel the oneness of it all...unity and separation all at once....such a feeling of shared validation.....   ~P


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5 posted 2004-05-18 11:39 AM


An influence that will not give up it's tease.
Smiles,
TD

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6 posted 2004-05-18 11:51 AM


o...the places you go.....

the whisper of willows
the swaying of sassafras
flutterings felt
in 2 hearts
that can feel
the splendor
in such moments

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7 posted 2004-05-18 12:42 PM


whoa! what a picture! love this!
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8 posted 2004-05-18 12:53 PM


Paul~
As always, such a beautiful word-sway~
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost,
the spirit rejoices over what it has left.
- Sufi epigram <))><

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9 posted 2004-05-18 12:54 PM


yes indeed, to all the above comments and then some.  
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10 posted 2004-05-18 03:31 PM


Paul -- W O W -- I love this one!   ....jo
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Absolutely welcoming...
in all aspects.

Thank you, Paul.

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12 posted 2004-05-18 04:24 PM


Very very beautiful...and so very true.
Hugs~

~Somewhere in my heart I'm always
Dancing with you in the summer rain~

choshi
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13 posted 2004-05-18 06:46 PM


An influence that will not give up it's tease.
Smiles,
TD.....


Thank you TD.....Smiles back....~P

choshi
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14 posted 2004-05-18 06:47 PM


o...the places you go.....

the whisper of willows
the swaying of sassafras
flutterings felt
in 2 hearts
that can feel
the splendor
in such moments


You know these places very well....~P

choshi
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15 posted 2004-05-18 06:48 PM


Thanks Dixie, glad you like.  ~P
choshi
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16 posted 2004-05-18 06:50 PM


As always, such a beautiful word-sway~
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

"word-sway...."  I like that Marge.

   Back  ~P

choshi
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17 posted 2004-05-18 06:51 PM


Thank you LJ, glad you like.....~P
choshi
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18 posted 2004-05-18 06:53 PM


-- W O W -- I love this one!   ....jo


Awww!      `back at you`  ~P

choshi
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19 posted 2004-05-18 06:54 PM


Absolutely welcoming...
in all aspects.

Thank you, Paul.


You welcome, Sunshine, and I feel so very welcomed by you.....~P

choshi
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20 posted 2004-05-18 06:57 PM


Very very beautiful...and so very true.
Hugs~

Thank you Nancy. I appreciate your perceptive reading regarding Truth....    Back to you ~P

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21 posted 2004-05-19 08:02 PM


A pleasure to read...James
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22 posted 2004-05-19 08:08 PM


had to come back for another look
choshi
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23 posted 2004-05-19 09:02 PM


Thanks James, I am glad you enjoyed the read....~P
choshi
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24 posted 2004-05-19 09:04 PM


had to come back for another look

Well, Dawn, thanks for stopping by....How about a cup of tea?      ~P

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25 posted 2004-05-20 10:07 PM


Yessss.....I do know this feeling so well, It's become almost a part of me.

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choshi
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26 posted 2004-05-21 01:26 AM


Yessss.....I do know this feeling so well, It's become almost a part of me.
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AAhhhh Yes!

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27 posted 2004-05-21 11:05 AM


And this touches my heart deeply... I love it! *S*
choshi
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28 posted 2004-05-21 05:39 PM


And this touches my heart deeply... I love it! *S*


I'm Glad,  Thank you ~S    

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