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exhale
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0 posted 2004-05-17 10:28 PM


things got so dark
it felt like my world was collapsing
like i was drowning in a sea of hate

you were my beacon of light
you were what kept me sane
play your sweet music
sing it to me
so i know your here

you say she hurt you
thousands of tiny arrows through your heart
you sang all your songs for her
now theres nothing to sing
she stole your voice

i'm here to give it back.


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Sadelite
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1 posted 2004-05-17 10:57 PM


Oh.  This leaves me speechless...  I feel the ache.
        Sadie

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2 posted 2004-05-17 10:59 PM



What a lovely promise
of the good of one, to another.

passing shadows
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3 posted 2004-05-18 04:11 AM


wow!
Endlessecho
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4 posted 2004-05-18 05:11 PM


This is beautiful.  
JL
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5 posted 2004-05-18 05:14 PM


Excellent!  Great attitude to have too.
Enjoyed.

JL

She said: ”You look cute in the dark.”


Susan
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6 posted 2004-05-18 08:20 PM


Great write.  Enjoyed.

Susan

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7 posted 2004-05-18 09:04 PM


Chelsea~

'she stole your voice

i'm here to give it back'


Such a lovely moment of thought~
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost,
the spirit rejoices over what it has left.
- Sufi epigram <))><

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