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Marge Tindal

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since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

0 posted 2004-05-17 09:10 PM

Luna, Touch My Knowing
~*Marge Tindal*~

~Out across vast
yon’ ebon of velvet night
waltzes moon in wayward flight
Skirting, flirting with passing stars
clear to Jupiter and halfway to Mars
Around the universe, immersed in glow
rays-in-haze to creatures here below
Behind a crinoline of clouded disguise
peeking discreetly out on other side
Never hiding her light for too long
curtsy to poets in sing-of-song
Luna, of love-light glowing
touch my knowing~

~It is approaching the phase of New Moon, darkly mysteriously on this night
Gathering light from the stars ... to wear at Full Moon height~

~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost,
the spirit rejoices over what it has left.
- Sufi epigram <))><

noles1@totcon.com

Suetang
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since 2001-03-07

Posts 5187
Melbourne, Australia

1 posted 2004-05-17 09:20 PM

Hi Marge

You know how much I love your poems about the moon and this one was stunning, especially the effect of the stars.

Take care.....Sue

I am in motion
I am blue
Love is an ocean
I'm anchored in you
- Shawn Mullins

Enchantress
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since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

2 posted 2004-05-17 09:36 PM

Marge you have outdone yourself with this Lunar beauty.
This is spectacular!! I love it!!
~Smiles & Hugs, Nancy~

~Somewhere in my heart I'm always
Dancing with you in the summer rain~

Sadelite
Member Elite

since 2003-10-11

Posts 2519

3 posted 2004-05-17 11:09 PM

Marge,
This one glows!!! How I wish I had your grace of poetry and those computer skills!!!
Enjoyed this stunning poem.
Sadie

Susan
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since 2004-03-27

Posts 5104
walking the surreal

4 posted 2004-05-17 11:17 PM

This sparkles in more ways than one. Lovely.

Susan

passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

5 posted 2004-05-18 04:06 AM

I'm amazed!

inkedgoddess
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-11-19

Posts 7392
Ohio

6 posted 2004-05-18 07:43 AM

crinoline of clouded disguise,
very nice touches here
you dazzled me!!

Gentle Spirit
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since 2000-10-09

Posts 13989

7 posted 2004-05-18 08:09 AM

Marge this is Luna lovely! Hugs.

LeeJ
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since 2003-06-19

Posts 13296

8 posted 2004-05-18 08:16 AM

Marge, this was beautifully written an presented...lovely words...thank you for sharing.

Betty
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since 2002-08-13

Posts 1159
Virginia

9 posted 2004-05-18 08:54 AM

Oh Marge I am so glad you share your talent with us. This is beautiful.
Love,
Betty

Margherita
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since 2003-02-08

Posts 22236
Eternity

10 posted 2004-05-18 10:30 AM

Amazing!
Dear Marge, gosh how do you do this ...you must have a magic stick!
Beautiful in all ways.
Another keeper.
Love and hugs. Margherita

Marge Tindal

Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

11 posted 2004-05-18 11:15 AM

~In the glow
of friends so true
comes softest sparkle
to guide us all through
phase of friendships
in glowing renew
Thanking you~

*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost,
the spirit rejoices over what it has left.
- Sufi epigram <))><

noles1@totcon.com

JL
Member Ascendant

since 2004-04-01

Posts 6128
Texas, USA

12 posted 2004-05-18 12:28 PM

Way too cool for a reply… speechless. Very nice indeed!

JL

She said: ”You look cute in the dark.”

jellybeans
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since 2000-10-13

Posts 2298

13 posted 2004-05-18 02:05 PM

*smiles* beautiful from start to finish...thank you for this gift

Charisma

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since 2000-09-30

Posts 5906
lost in blue pages

14 posted 2004-05-18 02:13 PM

Beautiful!!

love your moon creation very.....yep, very much

(((hugs)))
Charisma

Trillium

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since 2001-03-09

Posts 12098
Idaho, USA

15 posted 2004-05-18 06:03 PM

Dear Marge: This is pure magic! I love it.

Betty Lou

Betty Lou Hebert

majnu

Senior Member

since 2002-10-13

Posts 1088
SF Bay Area

16 posted 2004-05-19 01:51 AM

that was crazy cool. i love the way you always take full advantage of the medium add to your poem.

-majnu
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Timid thoughts be not afraid. I am a Poet.

Earth Angel
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since 2002-08-27

Posts 40215
Realms of Light

17 posted 2004-05-19 12:05 PM

A radiant and visually delightful post!!!

Mother God is smiling at you!

Lunar Love,
EO

Marge Tindal

Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

18 posted 2004-07-03 01:09 PM

~In the know
poet friends true
giving gentle sparkle
to see this lady through
phasing of friendship
amid the pages blue
Thanking you~

*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost,
the spirit rejoices over what it has left.
- Sufi epigram <))><

noles1@totcon.com

Beki
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since 1999-09-15

Posts 1569
Newport Beach, CA, USA

19 posted 2004-07-03 10:07 PM

taken as a whole this is outstanding! Wish I knew how to do this graphics stuff

iliana
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since 2003-12-05

Posts 13434
USA

20 posted 2004-07-04 03:46 AM

I am so glad this came back up (don't know how I missed it). Marge, this is fabulous in every way! HAPPY INDEPENDENCE DAY!

Songbird
Member Elite

since 1999-12-15

Posts 2184
Missouri

21 posted 2004-07-04 10:18 PM

How many ways are there to write about the moon? You should put together a book! BTW thanks for the poems and photos of your grandchildren. I am going to be a new granny this month, a new girl, sister to #1.

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