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Survival Cinquain
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Survival Cinquain |
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Pilgrimage Member Elite
since 2001-12-04
Posts 3945Texas, USA |
I stand shaking and weak- remembering your touch. You're gone now, and I'm alone, but- I stand. Nan (Pilgrim variety) |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Such feeling conveyed within this poem, nicely done. |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Even if just barely... Oh, I do so understand. Well done, Nan. |
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muted
since 2004-01-15
Posts 2949Elapsing, Eclipsing, Evolving |
i adore reading your forms  |
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Sadelite Member Elite
since 2003-10-11
Posts 2519 |
You've got that right. After a loss, it is something just to stand. Survival... Enjoyed, Sadie |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Nan~ You write sooooooo well ... the feelings conveyed are so real to touch~ *Huglets*  ~*Marge*~ ~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost, |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
This one stands tall! |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
yes! |
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Pilgrimage Member Elite
since 2001-12-04
Posts 3945Texas, USA |
Magnus-thank you! Sunshine, I know you understand this one. muted, I haven't written a cinquain in ages until this one. I do like the effectiveness of them, don't you? Sadie, and you have to stand if you're ever going to walk away. Marge, you're always so nice to me. Thank you. iliana, what a nice thing to say. passing shadows, Nan (Pilgrim variety) |
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