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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095
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outer wings I don’t think I could compare to ladybirds little princess' tangled around you you allow them onto your finger but there's no hibiscus for you to sit me on I am hushed and just a voice in the distance one which you would like to be lulled by and I would if you would only allow me to..... completely 170504 The clouds never expect it when it rains, but the sea, changes colour, but the sea, does not change. ~Stevie Nicks~ [This message has been edited by Dark Angel (05-17-2004 06:26 AM).] |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
touching write |
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Kaoru
since 2003-06-07
Posts 3892where the wild flowers grow |
This is beautiful. |
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garysgirl 
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Such a plea, is this. Who could resist to allow the "completeness"? Beautiful writing, Maree.  Hugs, Ethel |
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muted
since 2004-01-15
Posts 2949Elapsing, Eclipsing, Evolving |
Oh what gentle longing  your muse must be in a very good mood today  absolutely beautiful |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
What wonderful vision you have... here, in the states, we call them "ladybugs" but I think "ladybirds" is much prettier... as is this poem. |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
I am hushed and just a voice in the distance one which you would like to be lulled by and I would if you would only allow me to..... completely ============================= oh my....I am feeling this one to the core. a bittersweet beauty poetess Maree... love the hibiscus image too. I love you more the further I go ... |
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inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio |
beautiful in its message of what is not always acknowledged |
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Ratleader
since 2003-01-23
Posts 7026Visiting Earth on a Guest Pass |
Sweet....absolutely sweet....and so touchingly rendered. This one I keep. ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸ ¸¸ºº> ~~~(¸¸ER¸¸ºº> |
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MovesInSilence Member
since 2004-03-21
Posts 111Perth, Australia |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Maree "I don’t think I could compare to ladybirds little princess' tangled around you you allow them onto your finger but there's no hibiscus for you to sit me on" I could picture this so well. and the last is so rich with feeling...very poignant and so well done, my friend!  |
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majnu
since 2002-10-13
Posts 1088SF Bay Area |
soft like the image it evokes and the lullaby it begs to be allowed to sing. nice. -majnu |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
Fly.....beautiful and with such depth you write! |
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wranx Member Elite
since 2002-06-07
Posts 3689Moved from a shack to a barn |
Delicate....like crystal lace... meant to comment a while ago. Just lazy, I guess |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
Thank you all so very much. Maree  The clouds never expect it when it rains, but the sea, changes colour, but the sea, does not change. |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Dear Maree, what a beautifully inspired write! No hibiscus needed .... see he opened his heart, you said the magical "pass"word! So looooooooooovely! Love, Margherita  |
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gemjop Member Elite
since 2002-11-18
Posts 2587Pencilveinia, USA |
Whenever I havent written for a while, and I read you, it always makes me want to pick up a pen. You gave me beautiful images with these graceful words. The beauty you create is inspiring. gem xx |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
Lovely Maree! Very visual. |
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dingusjr Member
since 2003-09-24
Posts 415Missouri |
I like this...very much. |
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