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Marge Tindal
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0 posted 2004-05-16 09:05 PM



Diamanté Nights
~*Marge Tindal*~

Silver-slivered cluster
dripping lustre
sky-filled promises
lace diamanté dust
across a welkin sky
ambrosia's wafting scent
unguent on broken-hearted lovers
in discover of starlit nights
with twinkle of light
aglow in new eyes
reflecting
love


~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost,
the spirit rejoices over what it has left.
- Sufi epigram <))><

noles1@totcon.com

© Copyright 2004 Marge Tindal - All Rights Reserved
Magnus
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1 posted 2004-05-16 09:10 PM


Very nicely composed.  A beautiful poem.
Thanx Marge...

passing shadows
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2 posted 2004-05-16 09:14 PM


where do you get your imagination?
Enchantress
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3 posted 2004-05-16 09:22 PM


Wonderful Marge!
This polished up beautifully.
~Smiles & Hugs, Nancy~

~Somewhere in my heart I'm always
Dancing with you in the summer rain~

Martie
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4 posted 2004-05-16 09:34 PM


Marge-sis...everything you write shines!  
Suetang
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5 posted 2004-05-16 09:44 PM


So very beautiful Marge.

Take care.......Sue

I am in motion
I am blue
Love is an ocean
I'm anchored in you
- Shawn Mullins

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6 posted 2004-05-16 10:24 PM


Dear Marge:  This is really lovely!

Betty Lou

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Betty
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7 posted 2004-05-16 11:19 PM


This is so pretty Marge.
Love ya,
Betty

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8 posted 2004-05-16 11:31 PM


Some words I didn't understand. I am too young maybe. Most of it meant something to me, i just couldn't grasp the totality.

- B

ThisDiamond
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9 posted 2004-05-16 11:44 PM


As always you write with graceful thought, on a silken canvas dearie.
TD

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10 posted 2004-05-16 11:46 PM


okay, the ambrosia did me in.  I love this!  Beautiful words, dripping so elegantly down the page.  

btw, thanks for the e-mail.  It's good to see you too.  

~*Krista Lee Knutson*~

Let your life lightly dance on the edges of time like dew on the tip of a leaf.
~Rabindranath Tagore


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11 posted 2004-05-17 03:59 AM


beautiful as always


Bonnie j
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12 posted 2004-05-17 12:28 PM


Your polish makes PIP glow with beauty.
Hugs
Bon-Bon

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13 posted 2004-05-17 03:17 PM


Lovely--

Susan

The whole of the Universe resides within each individual heart.

Margherita
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14 posted 2004-05-17 06:24 PM


Dear Marge, this is a sparkling gem!
I love it and will keep it in the library.
Love and hugs. Margherita


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15 posted 2004-05-18 02:30 PM


As always beautiful penned dear lady, your words are always a treat to read

(((hugs)))
Charisma

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16 posted 2004-05-18 02:59 PM


Perfection in word and style, down to the last little twinkle!   ....jo
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17 posted 2004-05-18 03:01 PM


agree whole heartidly with each and every comment above...such lovely words.
Marge Tindal
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18 posted 2004-05-18 06:18 PM



My thanks to one and all for letting me share
a tiny 'diamond covered' thought with you~
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost,
the spirit rejoices over what it has left.
- Sufi epigram <))><

noles1@totcon.com

Titia Geertman
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19 posted 2004-05-18 10:04 PM



You do the shining and I'll do the loving

Your words know how to touch one's heart

Hugs and knuffels

Titia

Like scattered leaves...my words will flow

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