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Rendevouz
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Beki Senior Member
since 1999-09-15
Posts 1569Newport Beach, CA, USA |
Rendevouz For just a moment late last night our star seemed to ease its trembling. I lay here basking in its light, dreaming you close with a touch, a sigh; giving over all I know of passion and of sweet desire to the memory of times we lay kindling love's unquenchable fire. Years of unspent tenderness welled up from within, engulfing me in waves of pleasure, full tides of warmth until, trembling myself, at will, I looked up to see our faithful star joyfully, peacefully still. |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
That was absolutely beautiful! I actually had all kinds of emotions welling up in me as I read this moving poem of love!  EA |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Beki Well done enjoyed the read. |
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ryun33 New Member
since 2002-07-20
Posts 8 |
Very passionate, good Job! |
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garysgirl  
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Beki, this is a very romantic write. I really enjoyed reading it.   |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
beautiful...I relate to this well |
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Beki Senior Member
since 1999-09-15
Posts 1569Newport Beach, CA, USA |
beki curtsies humbly --- thank you everyone, I am glad you enjoyed the read. |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Lovely...James |
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