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majnu
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0 posted 2004-05-16 03:08 AM



I

Olden times have gone away,
Elder light begins to fade,
sing I will...
sing I will...
Before forever being laid...

Down to rest far I go,
Rain as each passing day,
dance I will...
dance I will...
While the waters yet play...

Paling sun withers to seas,
Drown your sorrows high one,
Let her gentle light cease,
Falling on my sleeping face.

-majnu
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Timid thoughts be not afraid. I am a Poet.

© Copyright 2004 Zaheer Abbas Ali - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2004-05-16 03:26 AM


very good write... I like it
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2 posted 2004-05-16 08:17 AM


Majnu...long time no read.  Welcome home!  Part I, hey?  let's see Part II, please...
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3 posted 2004-05-16 08:39 AM


It's so good to read you again Majnu

Maree

The clouds never expect it when it rains, but the sea, changes colour, but the sea, does not change.
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4 posted 2004-05-16 10:26 AM


May we all wish for this when our day comes.
Thank you.

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5 posted 2004-05-16 10:51 AM


looking forward to the next installment, i enjoyed this
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6 posted 2004-05-17 02:30 AM


thank you all for your kind words.

-majnu
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Timid thoughts be not afraid. I am a Poet.

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7 posted 2004-05-17 11:03 AM


nice read
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