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Greeneyes
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In Your Poetic Mind


0 posted 05-16-2004 12:29 AM       View Profile for Greeneyes   Email Greeneyes   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for Greeneyes



~~~
I want to walk in the captivity of your memory
who knew  darkness
was the name of  streets and edges --
the complicated path in which
soul&emotion combine meaning

palms pressed praying -- allow me to

become the river that breathes woman
~
and lets go


~~**~~
le vent chante avec le calme doux
calme de nuit
sien beauté sur mes lèvres
~~**~~
© Copyright 2004 Lauren~ - All Rights Reserved
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By the Seaside


1 posted 05-16-2004 12:35 AM       View Profile for BluesSerenade   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for BluesSerenade

Dear Lauren, you have a way of smoothing out the edges.
And like always, your poetry breathes, so fluently~

Very pretty, sweet poetess~
Susan
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walking the surreal


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become the river that breathes woman

Beautiful.

Susan
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Geez, I was just loggin' off when this popped up...

Glad I stuck around a bit longer..."the cavity of your memory..."

Nice!
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beautiful
Margherita
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Eternity


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I want to walk in the captivity of your memory


Wonderful lines, dear Lauren!
Love, Margherita
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I want to walk in the captivity of your memory
~~~~~~~~~~~~~
was the name of  streets and edges --
the complicated path in which
soul&emotion combine meaning

~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

become the river that breathes woman
~
and lets go

~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

ya had me from the opening plea....

*sigh*


in which
soul&emotion combine meaning



yessssssssssssssssssss


become the river that breathes woman
~
and lets go


yeessssssssss...exactly......

*sigh*


I love you more the further I go ...
before this existence ... you were always here inside of me.

Nelly Furtado

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Somewhere in time~


7 posted 05-17-2004 12:51 PM       View Profile for Enchantress   Email Enchantress   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Enchantress

~As gentle as a whisper...beautiful,...pretty lady~

~Somewhere in my heart I'm always
Dancing with you in the summer rain~

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8 posted 05-17-2004 12:55 PM       View Profile for muted   Email muted   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for muted

you slowed the beating of my heart for a moment there, it sighed...you are so gentle
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Happy Birthday sweetie
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