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nakdthoughts
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Between the Lines

0 posted 2004-05-15 07:49 PM



I Wonder

Time screams at me,
its importance an integral part
of who I am.

It supports me and etches
its moments upon my soul,
rooting me in who I am.

I watch its passing without you here
and feel jaded, a voice inside me
warning, common sense arguing
with desire.


"Only time will tell"....
so they say.

A time whose end has come...

perhaps

M

"Love is not blind - It sees more and not less, but because it sees more, it is willing to see less."
(Will Moss)

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Margherita
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since 2003-02-08
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Eternity
1 posted 2004-05-15 09:13 PM


quote:
It supports me and etches
its moments upon my soul,
rooting me in who I am.



This is wonderfully wise, dear Maureen.
Love, Margherita

Susan
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since 2004-03-27
Posts 5104
walking the surreal
2 posted 2004-05-15 10:19 PM


Excellent.

Susan

BluesSerenade
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since 2001-10-23
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By the Seaside
3 posted 2004-05-16 12:25 PM


I watch its passing without you here
and feel jaded, a voice inside me
warning, common sense arguing
with desire.

Awww Maureen, I'm right there wondering with you~

Much love and lots of hugs~

passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26
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displaced
4 posted 2004-05-16 03:40 AM


ouch
Beki
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since 1999-09-15
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Newport Beach, CA, USA
5 posted 2004-05-16 06:37 AM


"I watch its passing without you here
and feel jaded, a voice inside me
warning, common sense arguing
with desire."

I've been there - you describe it very well

nakdthoughts
Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200
Between the Lines
6 posted 2004-05-17 06:38 PM


Margherita thank you for being so supportive to my words.

Susan, glad you stopped by  *s

Lori...I love spontaneity ..but I guess I am getting use to those who are predictably unpredictable.
Missing you~
love ya too
M


passing shadows...now that's what I would have said if I read this


Beki ..thank you for  reading and responding

M.

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