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icebox
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in the shadows

0 posted 2004-05-15 06:41 PM




shells of sympathy

freedom's surging cleansing  night

death becomes the tide

©2004 by icebox

© Copyright 2004 icebox - All Rights Reserved
Margherita
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Eternity
1 posted 2004-05-15 06:59 PM


A frightening tide, dear icebox.
Impressive words!
Love, Margherita

Sunshine
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Listening to every heart
2 posted 2004-05-15 07:10 PM


Life's tides cleaning house...

well done, Sir.

Martie
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3 posted 2004-05-15 08:42 PM


icebox

I think there are small deaths all the time, and accepting them helps the grief of living.


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Florida's Foreverly Shores
4 posted 2004-05-15 09:37 PM


IceBox~
There is depth to your poetry that defies the tides~

*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost,
the spirit rejoices over what it has left.
- Sufi epigram <))><

noles1@totcon.com

Susan
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walking the surreal
5 posted 2004-05-15 10:15 PM


So much said in so few words.  Well written.

Susan

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Canada eh.
6 posted 2004-05-15 10:17 PM


Extremely well said sir.
Thank you.

BluesSerenade
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By the Seaside
7 posted 2004-05-16 12:40 PM


so many moves,  and a lot to feel here~
Good stuff, icebox~


passing shadows
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displaced
8 posted 2004-05-16 03:38 AM


I love how you do these!
iliana
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9 posted 2004-05-18 01:53 AM


Movements of clarity are being collected in my library and written by someone named you.   ....jo

[This message has been edited by iliana (05-19-2004 12:00 AM).]

Susan Caldwell
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10 posted 2004-05-18 04:18 PM


Never really considered it that way...

Water, cleansing, rebirth.

Must have a death for rebirth?

Okay...enough thinking for one day.

"cast me gently into the morning, for the night has been unkind"
~Sarah McLachlan~

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