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1slick_lady
Member Ascendant

since 2000-12-22

Posts 6088
standing on a shadow's lace

0 posted 2004-05-15 03:55 PM

No

did I believe you
as you went
out of view
it is not that
I thought you lied
I just knew
it wasn’t the truth
some words are
said just to be said
do they make you
feel any better
no
they don’t they just
add to the loneliness
a touch without a caress
it is like holding
on to a ghost
with no justice to
the living

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

1 posted 2004-05-15 04:40 PM

gawd! you're SO good at telling it like it is!

icebox
Member Elite

since 2003-05-03

Posts 4383
in the shadows

2 posted 2004-05-15 06:27 PM

Whoa!!!

Enchantress
Member Empyrean

since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

3 posted 2004-05-15 06:35 PM

Oh Yes!! Excellent Helen!
Hugs~

~Somewhere in my heart I'm always
Dancing with you in the summer rain~

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

4 posted 2004-05-16 10:11 PM

Nice writiing...I have one that I am having trouble believing...perhaps no's are appropriate...James

Kaoru

Member Elite

since 2003-06-07

Posts 3892
where the wild flowers grow

5 posted 2004-05-17 04:42 AM

"it is not that
I thought you lied
I just knew
it wasn’t the truth"

Awesome... you are..brilliant.

Goldenrose
Member Elite

since 2003-05-30

Posts 3665

6 posted 2004-05-17 04:49 AM

Very fine writing.enjoyed...

Goldenrose.

''There is no need for temples, no need for complicated Philosophies.
My brain and my heart are my temples; my philosophy is kindness''- Dalai Lama

garysgirl

Member Laureate

since 2002-09-29

Posts 19237
Florida, USA

7 posted 2004-05-17 05:06 AM

did I believe you
as you went
out of view
it is not that
I thought you lied
I just knew
it wasn’t the truth

Sometimes I think a person wants to believe what they are saying so badly that they won't admit even to themselves that they are lying. And, then sometimes, they're telling a bold faced lie and completely realize it.

Good writing Helen. Made me think.

MGROVES

Member Elite

since 2004-02-01

Posts 3802
california

8 posted 2004-05-17 05:40 AM

you said it very well. excellant

GG
Member Elite

since 2002-12-03

Posts 3532
Lost in thought

9 posted 2004-05-17 06:05 AM

it is not that
I thought you lied
I just knew
it wasn’t the truth
some words are
said just to be said

boy have I felt the effects of that before.
I hate that kind of loneliness...
it just seems so worthless,
but even more, just so heartbreaking.
Amazing write.

Always, Alyssa

Poems are made by fools like me,
But only God can make a tree.
Joyce kilmer

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