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Ericc
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0 posted 2004-05-15 03:03 PM



"...Here is your God." you said
with a wave before the
night.

And I smiled...nodding in
agreement.

Lost in the gesture of
your hand.


© Copyright 2004 Eric P McCarty - All Rights Reserved
ThisDiamond
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1 posted 2004-05-15 03:09 PM


Adoration is as much to worship in love, as to worship together.
Smiling at you.
TD

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2 posted 2004-05-15 03:10 PM


Oh sheesh....

how do you do this, time and again?

Beautiful!

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3 posted 2004-05-15 04:13 PM


Nicely said Eric...
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4 posted 2004-05-15 04:41 PM


cool!
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5 posted 2004-05-15 05:13 PM


Oh my...this is incedibly beautiful!!
You always amaze me..as you appear to write these so effortlessly.
~Smiles & Hugs, Nancy~

~Somewhere in my heart I'm always
Dancing with you in the summer rain~

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6 posted 2004-05-15 05:49 PM


love it!!
Margherita
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7 posted 2004-05-15 07:24 PM


Ahhh .... to take in Universe in one gesture and fill the heart with Divine infinity.

This is overwhelmingly majestic.
You know.
I love you. Margherita

Martie
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8 posted 2004-05-15 09:02 PM


Such simple words with so much power.  I much admire the way you do this, Ericc!
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9 posted 2004-05-15 10:29 PM


Poetry at its finest, not one single word wasted and so much said in such few words....oh, by the way, did I mention I loved this?
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10 posted 2004-05-16 06:41 AM


oh bravo! How wonder-fully succinct! I really like this!
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