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© Copyright 2004 Dawn van Krieken-Smith - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2004-05-15 09:53 AM



Pretty, pretty, pretty...
the poem and the poetess!

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2 posted 2004-05-15 09:54 AM


Beautiful soulful song here Dawn...
Lovely this...
Lovely you.
Hugs~

~Somewhere in my heart I'm always
Dancing with you in the summer rain~

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3 posted 2004-05-15 12:40 PM


Love the way you sing my sweet poetess.
TD

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4 posted 2004-05-15 12:57 PM


a beautiful presentation
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5 posted 2004-05-15 01:02 PM


A very beautiful poem.

      ~*Patricia*~

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6 posted 2004-05-15 02:01 PM


Very nice song indeed!  Beautiful.
JL

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7 posted 2004-05-15 06:04 PM


Dawn~
So very pretty is this~
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

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the spirit rejoices over what it has left.
- Sufi epigram <))><

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8 posted 2004-05-15 07:02 PM


And who will resist the siren's song, when it's presented with such grace and charm as yours?
Very beautiful, dear Dawn.
Love and hugs. Margherita

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9 posted 2004-05-15 10:25 PM


I echo the above sentiments.

Smile -- Susan

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10 posted 2004-05-16 03:03 AM


Oh This Diamond? she does sing beautiful.

this is a keeper.

Maree xx

The clouds never expect it when it rains, but the sea, changes colour, but the sea, does not change.
~Stevie Nicks~

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11 posted 2004-05-17 12:15 PM


*ticks box to keep, takes notes*

cool piece of writting buddy. enjoyed this one muchly.

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12 posted 2004-05-17 12:29 PM


this was beautiful


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that was cool.
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14 posted 2004-05-17 04:56 AM


A fine beautiful poem..thank you.

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15 posted 2004-05-17 05:12 AM


Dawn, this is so beautiful. I love the picture,
the form, and the words. Aren't these fun to write?
Hugs,
Ethel

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16 posted 2004-05-17 10:06 AM


Bittersweet unity of feelings, images and thought...So very evocative......~P
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17 posted 2004-05-17 10:06 AM


beautiful
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