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ctowen
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0 posted 2004-05-15 04:52 AM


rising, falling
     on tides of emotions

burning desires,
     stimulating oceans

igniting flames
     of dreams which passion reigns

love's endless fire
     and soothing gentle rains

One's outlook can be another's expression.
  

© Copyright 2004 C. Thomas Owen - All Rights Reserved
inkedgoddess
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1 posted 2004-05-15 09:56 AM


love's endless fire
     and soothing gentle rains


burn baby burn
let your passion
drown the mighty rain

burn baby burn
need love's fire
be restrained?

passing shadows
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2 posted 2004-05-15 02:14 PM


nice contrast and blend here

you'd make James Taylor proud

steavenr
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3 posted 2004-06-02 10:10 PM


nice write...such a pendelum ride of emotions...fits together very well...
iliana
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4 posted 2004-06-02 10:17 PM


Oh, bravo, bravo!  
Midnitesun
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Gaia
5 posted 2004-06-03 01:50 AM


Ver, very nice, Craig.
I just came back home from watching a gorgeous Oregon coast sunset (and it didn't rain today!)

ctowen
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6 posted 2004-06-03 05:03 AM


I've seen fire and I've seen rain,
   and I've seen love I thought would never end ...

   ... but sometimes, all we need is you, my friend ...


         Thank you all, my friends.

  KC - sounds fantastic, please send me a pic next time you get to watch a sunset ...
two of my favorite things!  

gemjop
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7 posted 2004-06-03 03:16 PM


Love it when you stop by! So calm and refreshing.

xx

Sudhir Iyer
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Mumbai, India : now in Belgium
8 posted 2004-06-03 03:20 PM


much enjoyed your write...

regards
sudhir

LeeJ
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9 posted 2004-06-03 03:25 PM


lovely and in sync
Marge Tindal
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10 posted 2004-06-03 03:33 PM


CTOwen~
Always in for a treat when you drop by~
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost,
the spirit rejoices over what it has left.
- Sufi epigram <))><

noles1@totcon.com

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