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Goldenrose
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0 posted 2004-05-15 04:27 AM



Waiting on the station, sun streams.
Wind blows in the trees, as trains
race past, backdraft felt.
Cars flow over crossings.

You are probably sat in sadness,
in memories, in nostalgia.
Quietness that only impending
death can bring, strength in waiting.

My thoughts are with you,
near you. The cool breeze is
murmurous within the trees,
whispers of your heart i hear on the air.

Consoling comfort, in your own
special way you will be bringing.
Love for your parents and care
you will provide in their painfull hours.

Your heart so special, your heart
is my comcern.I will be here to
ease your mind and see you through.
Love i give when most needed.

''There is no need for temples, no need for complicated Philosophies.
My brain and my heart are my temples; my philosophy is kindness''-  Dalai Lama

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passing shadows
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displaced
1 posted 2004-05-15 04:34 AM


very heartfelt and warm
Goldenrose
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2 posted 2004-05-15 04:41 AM


Thank you Dixie...very nice of you...

Goldenrose.

''There is no need for temples, no need for complicated Philosophies.
My brain and my heart are my temples; my philosophy is kindness''-  Dalai Lama

A Romantic Heart
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Forever In Your Heart
3 posted 2004-05-19 12:50 PM


Thank You...You always know just what I need and when I need it! so sweet...full of warm love, so much love and comfort...peacefulness...my soft place to fall...Your loving heart is so loveable!

Showing it now...

Love and Hugs
~ARH


Open your eyes, open your mind, open your heart, let me come in and show you love.....~ARH

JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16
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Kapolei, Hawaii, USA
4 posted 2004-05-19 12:55 PM


Nice writing...James
Suetang
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since 2001-03-07
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Melbourne, Australia
5 posted 2004-05-20 01:15 AM


Hello Phil

Your heart seems to have an abundance of love and it shows in your words.

Take care.......Sue

I am in motion
I am blue
Love is an ocean
I'm anchored in you
- Shawn Mullins

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