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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095
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starveling dawn came to me as vast as the silence and I hungered in a stupor.... but the only thing to eat was air 150504 The clouds never expect it when it rains, but the sea, changes colours, but the sea, does not change. ~Stevie Nicks~ |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
neat write |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
several layered images... good construction of a few words, m'friend...well done! |
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muted
since 2004-01-15
Posts 2949Elapsing, Eclipsing, Evolving |
 this is aching and longing....you do manage to pack huge emotion into a small space..somehow containing it. *want some curry? it aint air, but its nice*  |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Maree?  |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Dark Angel Not much, LOL Enjoyed. |
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JL Member Ascendant
since 2004-04-01
Posts 6128Texas, USA |
Very interesting. Enjoyed this one a bunch. Leaves a lot to the imagination. JL She said: ”You look cute in the dark.” |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
all and I thank you kindly. Mxx The clouds never expect it when it rains, but the sea, changes colour, but the sea, does not change. |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
here... breathe? whooooo...  Lusciousness. |
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Patricia Member Elite
since 2003-04-06
Posts 2160Missouri |
You breathed deep and exhaled perfectly. I know this and when dawn comes tomorrow, I will think of your words. Patricia |
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Greeneyes 
since 2000-09-09
Posts 9903In Your Poetic Mind |
Maree this is beautiful....  achingly beautiful...~~**~~ le vent chante avec le calme doux calme de nuit sien beauté sur mes lèvres ~~**~~ |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
Thank you so very much, you're all WONDERFUL! Maree  The clouds never expect it when it rains, but the sea, changes colour, but the sea, does not change. |
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MovesInSilence Member
since 2004-03-21
Posts 111Perth, Australia |
Cool Write leaves one hungering for more ... |
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majnu
since 2002-10-13
Posts 1088SF Bay Area |
yes. -majnu |
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Aenimal Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-18
Posts 7350the ass-end of space |
hugs bella, is it a full moon cause i'm starving for something myself at the moment..meh |
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pictureme Member
since 2003-11-28
Posts 248Ohio, USA |
DarkAngel, This left....me breathless! Great title, with lots said in little space! nice job, pictureme :-) |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
Maree, this was great! ! ! ...jo |
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gemjop Member Elite
since 2002-11-18
Posts 2587Pencilveinia, USA |
you made me think of vast open spaces, how silence and air streches out over us and out into the universe. and maybe how we starve for more knowledge of it.  another to keep. |
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Ratleader
since 2003-01-23
Posts 7026Visiting Earth on a Guest Pass |
Next time....look around. I'll be there somewhere. We can feed each other, there's always enough for that. ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸ ¸¸ºº> ~~~(¸¸ER¸¸ºº> |
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