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Mentally Diffused
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Mentally Diffused |
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Fagin Member
since 2004-05-07
Posts 126Ca 
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Mentally Diffused She don't want to lift her head, It's morning now, she'd rather stay in bed.. She should be going somewhere. She gets up, the sun still shines, the doctor says it's all just in her mind.. She should be doing better. Empty bottles by the bed, she tries to chase the demons from her head.. She should be doing better. Feel the lightning, Destroy the hate, Control the maddness, it's not too late! Shake the beast, deny it's rule.. before the morning comes... On the bridge, she stops and stares, she's lonely now and thinks that no one cares.. She's going nowhere still.. Feel the lightning, Destroy the hate, Control the maddness, it's not too late! Shake the beast, deny it's rule.. before the morning comes... She don't want to lift her head, It's morning now, she'd rather stay in bed.. She should be going somewhere. On the bridge, she stops and stares, she's lonely now and thinks that no one cares.. She's going nowhere still.. Feel the lightning, Destroy the hate, Control the maddness, it's not too late! Shake the beast, deny it's rule.. before the morning comes... Lyrics/Arrangement By Robert Rilling |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
This is very strong, and I like the repeat even if there was no outcome. Good work! Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind. Unknown |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Robert Lyrics to live by...well done! |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
I was not surprised to see "lyrics" on the bottom because I was going to say something like, this would make a great song.  |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
You've got to quit talking about me like this...  I hear the music, Robert... and I'm keeping the Dobro safe...   |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Well...I was just saying earlier it was about time for another from you. Excellent powerfully written Robert... Would love to hear this put to music. ~Smiles & Hugs, Nancy~ ~Somewhere in my heart I'm always |
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muted
since 2004-01-15
Posts 2949Elapsing, Eclipsing, Evolving |
 nothing more i can say or do...i'll just smile |
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