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forne_marin
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since 2004-04-13
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Spartanburg, South Carolina

0 posted 2004-05-14 05:02 PM


OLD HABITS DIE HARD


Don't knock on my door.
Don't come to my house.
Stay away.
I don't want anything you have to offer.
Get away from my home.
I didn't call you!
What do you want of me?
Leave me be!





Damn Pizza Boy.



I believe the most important component of a poem is rhythm. Rhythm is the heartbeat of a poem. It is what makes poetry poetry.

© Copyright 2004 Jonathan Long - All Rights Reserved
Toerag
Member Ascendant
since 1999-07-29
Posts 5622
Ala bam a
1 posted 2004-05-14 05:03 PM


And...it took ya longer than thirty minutes..is it free?
iliana
Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434
USA
2 posted 2004-05-14 05:24 PM


LOL!
passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577
displaced
3 posted 2004-05-15 04:19 AM


you didn't give a good tip

they get irate about that, yaknow

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